Misconduct

Misconduct

A Poem by Ana B.

 

 

She’s twenty three

Wondering how life should be…

Ignoring realities…

Befriending profanities…

 

If life’s full of meadows

And choice is a path…

It’s  easy to get tangled in echoes

Of  the golden age’s wrath…

 

Searching for the meadow still

Right after the devilry’s hill

Silent desperation, the driving wheel

A skillful thief , with nothing to steal

 

But when you keep being a thief

At some point ,something’s  gotta give

Right is always easier said than done

Then your poker face is fooling no one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2015 Ana B.


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I always enjoy reading your words :) Another great poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

Thank you Aaron :)
I loved the way you've put the 'coming of age' phase in everyones life and how escaping reality is really not a choice we can make..the world ensures that.
Great work ana! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, though i really am twenty three :)
Roshan Nair

7 Years Ago

Lol well it is an inevitable realization nonetheless :)
Ana B.

7 Years Ago

yup, it is :)
good job with rhymes, loved the last line!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for stopping by :)
An excellent job with the rhyming.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by Noel :)
Awesome piece of work, the last stanza stands so true,thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you liked it J :)
"It’s easy to get tangled in echoes
Of the golden age’s wrath…" An amazing play of words, truly inspiring. I hope to write as well as you one day!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

I am positive you will! Thank you for stopping by :)
It's so easy to get fooled. I've been duped by people on line so many times. Just being nice to people and then you realize they are not what you thought. Actually it's happened offline too. I really enjoyed this Ana. I can relate to many of yours so well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

Well, on the other hand, you get a chance to see the real face, and if its not as good as you though.. read more
love the metaphors used in this one...the old days aren't always golden, the past isn't always worth grabbing onto, even though the present might make us want to do that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob, insightful words....
''If life’s full of meadows
And choice is a path…
It’s easy to get tangled in echoes
Of the golden age’s wrath…''
Wow it's true, when you steal something, at last something will come againts you.
A interesting poem, It's really good!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
had to put this in my library straight from the first line, its work beyond compare, you took me floating on a breeze of a dream, although she puts out a bad face your words make her alluring, in the end i would not follow her but for a second she draws me in, such a remarkable poem you created Ana, just fantastic, thank you so much :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ana B.

7 Years Ago

Wow, such beautiful words, many many thanks Richard, for being so kind :) It means a lot to me.

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