Comely Dream

Comely Dream

A Poem by Ana B.

It’s a beautiful day in a beautiful world.

No painted wincing on this tableau

Just a serene soul, gracefully adorned

With a bright Sun, with no shadow.

In such days, no love is diluted…

No minds are polluted…

No words are needed

No thoughts are heeded…

Chocolate raindrops

For a heart full of hopes…

And a hidden smile

I want to stay here a while.

 

 

 

 

© 2015 Ana B.


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I mean with the amazing beautiful imagery you've painted here, I wouldn't want to leave either. Chocolate raindrops, I love that metaphor. I would instantly enter into Dreamland if this was being read to me out loud. Overall this piece is graceful and full of peace. I love it!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ana B.

5 Years Ago

Thank you for the sweet review dear Jezi :)
Shadow Paradox

5 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)
Some incredible imagery here. My personal favourite line is:
"Just a serene soul, gracefully adorned with a bright sun with no shadow".

Read that over and over. Such a touching line.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ana B.

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the beautiful words Willis :)
Wow.. This poem provides an escape for many.. Beautiful!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ana B.

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Wow.. This poem provides an escape for many.. Beautiful!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Thanks for the lovely poem with it's wonderful imagery. Chocolate raindrops...yes!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ana B.

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much Shari
Everybody would love to dip their feet in those waters and this genius of a poem makes it happen somehow. I already feel light. Thanks for the beautiful poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana B.

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Lovely peaceful write. Sounds like a beautiful place to just relax and enjoy life for what it is and not all the stress and problems :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ana B.

5 Years Ago

It does, thank you Aaron :)
Such a lovely piece :) It holds such innocence and love. I especially loved the sweet taste of 'chocolate raindrops' lol seriously I would love to live in a world where that happens hahah XD Anyways great job and hope to read more from ya.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ana B.

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your sweetness Artine :)
lovely piece, i would like to stay there lol.
Really a beautiful write.

No minds are polluted…
No words are needed
No thoughts are heeded…

wow, well written i loved those lines.

armin. ...

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ana B.

5 Years Ago

Thank you a lot Armin :)
who would not want to stay there a while sounds like heaven to me, more beautiful writing Ana, you are a fountain of light and sweet words, superb :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ana B.

5 Years Ago

thank you very much dear Richard, i guess spring makes me giddy :D

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