Powerless

Powerless

A Poem by Ana B.

Can’t say yes

                To your enveloping embrace…

Cannot agree

                With your sugar covered trickery

Cannot control

                 These tiny shivers of cold…

Can’t foresee

                 What you do to me…

Cannot confess

                 Am I lonely…or obsessed…

Can’t stop

               Once you started this plot

Can’t say yes

                 To the warmest caress

Can’t say no

                  When you ask me if you should go…

                

 

© 2015 Ana B.


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Great Write Ana. Loved it with it's a unique style that you present and it's wonderful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ana B.

8 Years Ago

The sweetest words....thank you Terrence!
Terrence Chang

8 Years Ago

You're welcome Ana
Perhaps it is love....

:) Julie

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ana B.

8 Years Ago

Perhaps it is, thank you Julie :)
This is what we call 'love'
Love is sweet obsession.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ana B.

8 Years Ago

yes it is, thank you :)
I enjoyed the poem. Nice when the answers are hopeful and positive. Nice flow of thoughts leading to a very good ending. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ana B.

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear John.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome Ana.
so true............... good job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ana B.

8 Years Ago

Thanks Daisy .
a stunner Ana, just the style and the way you begin each line is original enough to get my praise but of course the writing is magnificent too :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


R Smith

8 Years Ago

haha i know that feeling, had a lot of unexpected write's in my time :)
Ana B.

8 Years Ago

:) well, the unexpected is a beautiful reminder of how much is yet to do....
R Smith

8 Years Ago

well said, i'm right with you there :)
Love it!
My favorite of yours!
Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ana B.

8 Years Ago

Thank you Emily :)
Well!!!!!!!!! This is marvelous.
Great write dear.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ana B.

8 Years Ago

Thank you !!
Saddam

8 Years Ago

Welcome dear
WoW!!!
beautiful poem.......
clever and creative writing......
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ana B.

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much Pushkar :)
Pushkar Prabhat

8 Years Ago

you are welcome!!! :) :)
I could feel the intoxicating and obsessive passion in this one, perhaps of a bitter-sweet relationship. I can definitely feel the confused emotions of the narrator. Amazing poem! :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much my friend for stopping by :)

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