Dynasty

Dynasty

A Poem by Ana B.
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a wee dramatic old scribble

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Between the clouds maker

And the master of shadows

The army of sky breakers

Release their night-dipped arrows

 

So that in the forgotten realms

Some light will shine

And the daughters of wars

Some corners of peace could find

 

Some sketches of hope…

A balm for their shadow kissed soul

The magic that a fantasy can evoke

To erase all that the darkness stole

 

No legions of faith and armies of moonlight

Can do it for us…

Cause only we can find the hidden delight

And the edges of this eternal contrast…

 

Through Devil’s eyes

Our soul is corrupt with stealth,

But no matter how hard we try

The truth unravels by itself.


© 2017 Ana B.


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Hrm... Astounding stuff, Ana... I completely and honestly would LOVE to go into all the lines I like... But the whole thing is a line "I like"... Heh...

*And the daughters of wars
Some corners of peace could find
Some sketches of hope…*

No matter how stealthy I am with my inner corruption... It always unravels itself at the end of a shadow slipped... You always teach me something, and this was no different of an experience... Brilliant, truly...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your reviews dear Silente, they always bring joy to me. This was written when i was no.. read more
This is wonderful. Kept me interested.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you Snow Angel.
i enjoyed the rhythm of the piece and the excellent word choice. well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you Petar :)
This reads with a mesmerizing flow of imagery that feels almost dreamlike. Your rhyme & rhythm are loosely & well-done, which goes with the breezy mood of your message. Many people write about the struggle between dark & light, but you've done the important thing of making your version sound fresh & original.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for the beautiful words :)
I enjoy the direction the reader takes while reading this great job.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jade :)
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You take us on a journey my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

I'm glad i do. Thanks :)
Great last lines! Experienced that first hand lol
Lovely piece of writing as always by you, Ana (:

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Yumna :)
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

You're welcome :-)
I enjoyed this on so many levels, I look forward to reading more from you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you Mr.e :)
nice poem and thanks for sharing. why i didn't read this beautiful poem before??

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

haha, it goes way back :) Thank you Abraham.
Queen of rhyme and assonance and now of metaphor too.
Let us all embrace the magical time of the day and let our imaginations run free but not succumb to evil in so doing.
The imagery is stunning.

ps this recallled to me a fav song - 'Night Vision' by Suzanne Vega - coming to a profile near you !! lol

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

Vega is my idol. lol
welcome Ana. Hope your weekend is playing nice.
Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Well, no wonder is the Brightest star in the Lyra constellation hehe
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

Touche - lol...genius right there too...

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