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Dynasty

Dynasty

A Poem by Ana B.
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a wee dramatic old scribble

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Between the clouds maker

And the master of shadows

The army of sky breakers

Release their night-dipped arrows

 

So that in the forgotten realms

Some light will shine

And the daughters of wars

Some corners of peace could find

 

Some sketches of hope…

A balm for their shadow kissed soul

The magic that a fantasy can evoke

To erase all that the darkness stole

 

No legions of faith and armies of moonlight

Can do it for us…

Cause only we can find the hidden delight

And the edges of this eternal contrast…

 

Through Devil’s eyes

Our soul is corrupt with stealth,

But no matter how hard we try

The truth unravels by itself.


© 2017 Ana B.


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i really like this one, it really puts the perspective out that nobody, not even a deity can reveal happiness or truth to us; except ourselves. Very well written and beautifully worded. AGAIN i am starstruck by your finesse with the written art.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much my friend :)
Amazing artwork and words.
"Through Devil’s eyes
Our soul is corrupt with stealth,
But no matter how hard we try
The truth unravels by itself."
Hard to know the truth from a lie in this mess-up world Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear John.
love this, it it is full of hope and faith and belief !! @ove the image too of the Angels watching over us !!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much Sereena!!
A well written piece
Of clarity
Cleansing
And spiritual relief

I enjoyed it very much :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you Nisreena, nice pic btw :)
Nicely written Ana

Through Devil’s eyes
Our soul is corrupt with stealth,
But no matter how hard we try
The truth unravels by itself.

I like the ending, smooth.






Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you Robert :)
Fantastic write!
yes that pesky devil is always around:(
I am very aware of it and try daily to keep him away,
great piece of work and thanks for sharing, b-blessed!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

yeah, i know the feeling, thank you my friend :)
"Through Devil’s eyes
Our soul is corrupt with stealth,
But no matter how hard we try
The truth unravels by itself."

That final stanza was awesome!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thanks my dear :)
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I enjoyed the final stanza the most. Great message & nicely written.

- Brittney

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you Brittney :)
Some sketches of hope…
A balm for their shadow kissed soul
The magic that a fantasy can evoke
To erase all that the darkness stole.........
you are brilliant with your writing, I finally reached to your work...:))

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

:D Thank you very much!!
By and large we have enough tools to help us steer the right course but unfortunately being human makes us very dodgy captains - even of our own soul - legion are the obstacles (temptations). I am confused by the title and wonder if it would wear the title 'Destiny' better?
The language is so eloquent it feels as if it belongs to another time - a time of scribes and soothsayers.
A superior write all in all.


Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

It feels like our temptation and inner contradiction is our Dynasty, as well as Destiny i suppose. T.. read more

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