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A Poem by Ana B.

Place that last apple

In my basket of selfishness…

And if life is based on example

Then our hearts are still directionless

 

These hues of the ground

Play in tidal fever…

In lethargy I am forever bound

In night, with this life going shiver

 

My heart is stubborn

Like a nemesis on his last mission

It may be now summer

Yet I’m stuck in my winter’s limited edition…


 

© 2015 Ana B.


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Wonderful stupendous writing Ana

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much my friend!
Terrence Chang

4 Years Ago

Your welcome
this poem is wonderful..... great job ana

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

thanks Daisy :)
Your choices of words in this poem definitely took my heart away... mind returning please?

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

:) well....it's a nice heart :) Thank you a lot!
Nicely written piece Ana. Stubbornness will get you nowhere except the same place you are in right this minute. Everything around us is in constant change and evolving. So go with everything else and change and evolve. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by Robert, have a great day.
A very gud narration with a very gud meaning.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you again :)
It's a touching poem..V. Nice write..!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Share the apple, Ana, don't keep it for yourself. Life is a series of seasons passing by, ups and downs, everything passes even the bad times. There's only one thing you can't lose and that's hope. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. :) Rudi

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear Rudi :)
Hello Ana, this is beautifully written. Harvesting the love being
Planted, or the one that was forgotten. Im a nature lover so I love this
Kind of writing. Thanks for sharing! :-) :-) :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the wonderful stop by E :)
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

4 Years Ago

You're welcome, my friend. :) Rudi
Interesting. Break that circle. Right to the core. Nicely done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ana B.

4 Years Ago

Breaking the circle is the first step to the truth.....Thanks Elliot
Ana B.

4 Years Ago

* Elliott ( sorry, because i hate when people don't get my name right)
Ben E. J. Edwards

4 Years Ago

No problem, aha. I understand.
I feel like you feel stuck in a life going round in circles, i see no selfishness but directionless ? maybe you look for something or one but have so far failed to see it/them, i get the lethargy and the darkness of night they weigh you down when hopes and dreams are not fulfilled, the stubborn heart drives you on though to seek anew just release yourself from the overbearing cold of hearts winter and step into that summer, well that's my take on this exquisite poem Ana, brilliant as always :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ana B.

5 Years Ago

:) A fantastic take i would say! Thank you very much Richard for the amazing words :)

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