Prayer

A Poem by Ana B.

Dear Void - let me stay in your arms,

Just till those notes of jazz are playing over the clouds.

Mind likes to travel through this world’s endless charms

But still I return to my melancholy’s velvet shrouds.

Slow dance through imagination…

Taste of tulips on my lips…

Couldn’t foresee my selfdom’s eradication

As it drank my soul in a few sips…

Oh, those afternoons

That smell of mint and magic

Sailing through my mind’s lagoons...

Through cities devoid of any logic...

Logic...looking for traces of December in July

Late night tales lingering in mornings…

Got such ugly thoughts to beautify

As my mind is still soaring

Will the time stop

If i’d be here all at once?

© 2019 Ana B.

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PaintedBirdy

gorgeous poem. and i love the picture of the fibonnaci spiral too. i pray goodness for you :) thanks for sharing this art.

Posted 4 Years Ago

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the warm words :))

HadesRising

Very nice piece. Well Done.

Posted 4 Years Ago

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)

jacob erin-cilberto

i love that idea "if i could be here all at once"---
but those thoughts that wander...we never can seem to be in one place at a time, can we.
Negativity fighting against positivity...thoughts and feeling battling...oh thank God for those moments of peace...yes, those precious moments.

j.

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4 Years Ago

are you kidding? I always love reading your work and you disappear for too long at a time...

4 Years Ago

:) Very glad you do)))) Eh getting tangled up in life does that sometime....plus i always tend to tr.. read more

4 Years Ago

well doing that exploring will give you more fuel for driving the words to the page.
that's a.. read more

Chris

"...Constantine... an intense movie."

There are evenings -
I exist in ...thought
and just want to touch
another's soul
and feel their touch
upon mine.

Chris

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4 Years Ago

there are mornings when the tickle of the Sun makes one feel more alive than ever....Thanks for maki.. read more

4 Years Ago

It's all in the "Ayes"...
and being softly held.

4 Years Ago

Indeed ))))

Chase Dylan

Duuuudddee.... I remember you... As soon as I clicked the song...
Are you the one who linked Max Richter to your poems before?
Regardless, I saw
"Dear Void"
As I scrolled though the info feed thingy...
HAD to read...
Was not dissapointed
A true trip, and had to be taken in more than a few sips...
I REALLLLLLLY like the pairing on
"mint&magic"
Super clever, and the ownership emphasized on your emotion
Cold feelings amid hot drinks...
Or is it hot feelings and cold drinks...