a wish...

a wish...

A Poem by Ana B.

One day I will be chasing peony clouds

And swim in the ever blue…

And to shatter those chains of doubts

I must discover that other hue

 

That will melt my burning resistance

That makes me such an outstanding lone star,

That shines on with such a focused insistence

Yet that light can’t ever reach so far

 

To yank those weeds from the garden

That invaded the silent shrine

A silence that had roots long and deep… yet forgotten

A rare purity - melodically crystalline…

 

Those few who can hear that song

Awaken and spread the light

So those hearts that slept for so long

Can finally reach the end of the night.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2019 Ana B.


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Ana B.

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I admire the diction in this poetry. It really activates the imagination of the reader. Thumbs up for this work of artistry.

Posted 6 Days Ago


Ana B.

5 Days Ago

Thank you MARS!! :)
This poem is awesome. Great rhyme scheme here. I really enjoyed this poem. Great job here.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Ana B.

3 Months Ago

Thank you :))))
The rhyming, irregular meter and spiritual focus of this one make me think of Emily Dickinson. Verse two, with its discussion of resistance, is especially profound. Well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Ana B.

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the amazing words John :)

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Added on December 5, 2019
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