Eden

Deep in the night

Dreams are flying a kite,

Woven in midnight satin

Where anything can always happen:

Liquid stardust painting hills,

Moonlight patiently stills

And awaits for the dance of petals

That quite tenderly settles

Down the tempest of darkness

That has awoken the harshness

Of the unforgiving wind of fate.

But it is never too late

To ask for some tenderness,

From the just yet generous

River of life, caressing the shores

In the hidden valleys that the night adores

And bottles the dreams

We see on midnight screens…

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a graceful journey in words & your chosen artwork is special. I often write about taking a journey in space . . . there are a million variations & I never tire of this theme. Well-done imagination fun (((HUGS)))

[Ana B.]

I am fascinated by it also :) There is a special kind of beauty in the vastness of the infinity. Thank you for stopping by)))

[StormeLight]

Very beautiful and eloquent =)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[StormeLight]

of course =)

[emmajoy]

Words within and by which to dream. Thoughts overturned by a float of sky.. space? Your words truly wrap the senses, don't know how else to describe how i feel after reading and there's the music..

' Moonlight patiently stills ~ And awaits for the dance of petals ~ That quite tenderly settles .. ' Peace anticipating yet more.. and unparalleled

2021 Inspiringly gentle as was!

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear friend))) I have forgotten about this poem, it is refreshing to read it now. Thank you for stopping by here. Hugs

[Chris]

Lovely music to dream by...

[Ana B.]

Indeed it is. Lovely to see you Chris ;)

[Neville]

the title drew me in.. the words merely held me.. like a gentle hug, on a starry winter's night...

[Ana B.]

Thank you Neville!!