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Picked up the pen))))

Does it matter which song?

As long as I dance;

Belligerent is the concept of ‘’wrong’’

Yet graceful is the heart full of romance.

Are we alone in this ballroom?

Did I learn how to dance in synch?

Am I too naïve to presume

That all we have is this unassailable link?

That makes us float above the doubts

And sing to the wind,

Giving fatuous shapes to the clouds,

As the stars obediently dimmed

And made room for love.

 

 

Author's Note

Love this russian artist

Reviews

[Karmee]

This is wonderful, your words just flow down the page, love your picture as well

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by Karmee :)

[Kim S.]

Ah, this is such a wonderful write, enjoyed this

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the lovely words Beckie :)

[Pauline]

An enjoyable piece of ink Ana, especially the last five lines. A pleasure to read.

Pauline.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the lovely words, Pauline :)

[Pauline]

You are more than welcome Ana. Love the painting.

Pauline.

[Chris]

The artist has a sweet voice.

Behind my eyes I can see the couple moving to their music - so nicely depicted... Hi Ana, has been awhile. Hope all is good within your purview.

[Ana B.]

Hi Chris, thank you for stopping by. All is good, life is good and generous to me. I hope you are well. Hugs!

[Chris]

Awww... Your weather being ok? - heard of widespread flooding?

[Ana B.]

The weather is brutal. Very hot. I've read about the flooding through Europe....here is just very hot, like 93 Fahrenheit hot...

[Chris]

downright "toasty"... sort of sunscreen under the clothes weather.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love music. All music that make the feet move. I enjoyed the deep thoughts and how you twisted the words dear Ana to hopeful ending. The painting was beautiful also. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear friend for always having warm words for me. Hugs

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Ana.

[Chris Shaw]

You picked your pen up Ana. Beautiful image you have posted. There is always a place for love and a place for dance. Whether poetry or dance it's a way to be creative and express one's inner self.

Chris

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the inspiration Chris!!

[Chris Shaw]

You know I am so pleased that you've got going again. Really makes me smile :))

[Ana B.]

Me too :))))))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think there is always room for love, and it is always the time to dance.
the finest expression of self is in dance and dance is poetry as much as writing the feelings down.
so glad to see that you picked up the pen again, ana,
j.

[Ana B.]

I agree completely Jacob, thank you for your words and for stopping by.

[emmajoy]

'.. sing to the wind, - Giving fatuous shapes to the clouds, - As the stars obediently dimmed - And made room for love.. '

We don't have to understand the words to feel their meaning? The video, that lovely painting,. and of course, your heart-felt words - create a Whole that creates the finest illusion: the being of self, without apology because - how you feel and how you are is for you and perhaps, another. Whichever - liberated, set free.. like it or not.

[Ana B.]

Very insightful dear friend. Thank you, as always, for shining some light 'round here. Hugs!

[emmajoy]

I try.. truly do.. x

[emmajoy]

Please write again.. soon, Ana.

[Ana B.]

Will do. Hugs dear Emma ))))