A movie behind eyelids

It's been a while...

On the wings of dreams I sail the clouds

Lost in the moonlight’s embrace…

Where magic doesn’t hide its whereabouts,

Where thoughts and worries have no space…

 

And oceans of stardust paint the skies

Wave after wave of endless delight,

And wishes unravel in front of the curious eyes

And beauty is shining in all of its light…

 

The world is brave, the world is fierce

Full of hopes and wonders,

That are hidden in the fields full of fears

Baiting minds in making terrible blunders…

 

And those brave enough to cross such a field

And gather a blunder or two along the day,

For them a new adventure is revealed,

Where love is always only a smile away.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Anushka joshi]

All my childhood fairytales, you summed up into a beautiful Ana. I think about these lines while stargazing under the full moon. It is beautiful

[Ana B.]

Thank you so much for the amazing words, Anushka!! :)

[Rassoul]

I like this poem so much,!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[anne]

It took my heart away, beauty is just a word. I dream this beautiful world.

🌜🌛

Loved it Ana!
Came here after six years but I remember, you were my first reviewer. Thank you for helping me lend first step in writerscafe world.

[Ana B.]

Wow, thank you so much for your warmth Anne, hopefully your journey is magical so far :)
Hugs!

[Brad Dehler]

"Always a smile away" what a pleasant ending to a beautiful poem. It was a nice dreamy moonscape of a poem that takes us out of the everyday hum drum. Mystic

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the wonderful words Brad))

[barleygirl]

This is beautifully dynamic & inspirational. Strong rhyme & rhythm float the reader along with ease. Feels like you've been able to "LET GO" & let this one flow without a bunch of fussing (((HUGS)))

[Ana B.]

You are very generous :) I am happy you liked it, hugs!

[poetgurl]

And those brave enough to cross such a field
And gather a blunder or two along the day,
For them a new adventure is revealed,
Where love is always only a smile away.

Love these lines here, this is a beautiful write

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the lovely words, Lady K!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Ana.
"And those brave enough to cross such a field
And gather a blunder or two along the day,
For them a new adventure is revealed,
Where love is always only a smile away."
The above is great wisdom shared. We must be brave and if we fall. Get up wiser. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank for the amazing words my dear :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Ana.

[Miss Sharon]

Such a beautiful and hope-filled write! I love it. ~Sharon

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Sharon!

[Chris]

This held a smile behind my eyes as I sipped coffee.

[Ana B.]

And how do you take your coffee by the way? :D

[Chris]

Black and taste-full.

[Ana B.]

yikes, I can't savor mine without heavy cream, cinnamon and turmeric)))))

[Chris]

sounds good actually... makes for a nice aroma and more of a dessert to sip. I like black for beginnings and thoughtfulnesses, focus... and appreciate the "bite".

[Chris Shaw]

Your dreams are the kind of dreams that I would like to have, if only I could sleep. Your poem is conveyed with skill, fine imagery and flows beautifully. Well done Ana. Liking your new avatar :)

Chris

[Ana B.]

Thank you so much Chris! I am sorry to hear you have trouble with sleep, on the occasions that i can't sleep i can barely function, so that doesn't sound like fun.

[Chris Shaw]

It isn't helpful for poetry composition, that's for sure Ana :) My output has gone down to snail's pace :)

[Ana B.]

Yikes, i hope its a temporary thing Chris :)