Mass Murder In Eutopia

I'm up at the top, I'm ready to jump. 
There's no one who can help save myself. 
Said my prayers in my tears
F**k this, I'm facing my fears. 

Today out of all days I'm fixing the wrong
(someone take me, I'm singing my last song)
The man in sky cries in his cloud
As I join the keeper under the ground. 

Can't you tell 
Every time I laughed it wasn't to often. 
When I stare at the floor...

I'm done, there's nothing more.

I knew what was at stake, with no last note

With that last step what do you know, the rope broke...

Eyes open, in a new dawn.

I know now, I must carry on.

Author's Note

a short poem about a rough time... enjoy.

Reviews

[Emrys Realmskip]

Wow, i really liked this poem.
"There's no one who can help save myself.
Said my prayers in my tears".... those were my favorite lines :)
Great job!
Savvy

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

thank you so much (: and i must agree, i love that line as well.

[nigrum homonculus]

this is great. especially the ending. i do love your wordplay as well
"the man in sky cries in his cloud
As I join the keeper under the ground."
absolutely love that line. well done!