It's Always The Quiet Ones That Can Say The Craziest Things...

Waking up there's always that question: "What do I do later?"
Seems like sometimes I'm just a caterer.
A clown just to entertain these f*****g monkeys.
While they sit and point at me. 

I spend too much confided, ranting in my own realm. 
You ask what it is but you can't handle the truth that's held.

If you could peer into the thoughts I obfuscate
You'd stab your own eyes so you can't concentrate 
To the incommodious details of horror.

I'm a menace of my own creation.
Not for malevolence but protection.
This world is dark and very cruel,
And to expect the worst is what I do.
I've come to adore it but it casts a shadow.
To them I'm the beast to be cast to the gallows.

Mollified hearts will relinquish
As Hannibal and Ripper vanquish
The mortals that stand conceited.
Note that vein cries were expectorated. 

Attila, Vlad, Jigsaw, and Freddy with blood lust that would not falter.
They are mere children, I am the father.
A resident to the asylum I am in their perspective.
I remain dormant with "illusions" secretly collective
Somewhere deep within my cerebellum. 

I'm a menace of my own creation.
Not for malevolence but protection.
This world is dark and very cruel,
And to expect the worst is what I do.
I've come to adore it but it casts a shadow.
To them I'm the beast to be cast to the gallows.

Author's Note

i was told to mix it up... so here's the a morsel of my "dark" side.

Reviews

[nigrum homonculus]

"Attila, Vlad, Jigsaw, and Freddy with blood lust that would not falter.
They are mere children, I am the father."

damn man! thats an epic line. definitely 1 of your best. i know that i say this a lot but your wordplay is awesome. i seriously envy it. you did well!

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

thank you so much man

[Admiral Kirk]

This is a very deep and intriguing poem... But if you went inside my thoughts, I'm sure even you would run out screaming. See, being much quieter than you (as I am much quieter than everybody) I am obviously much insaner than you. My brain has a lot of darkness... Great poem, great read. I like it.

[Peaceworker22]

I believe you meant "vain" but it's good nonetheless.

[GunMetal]

This was really cool. Excellent use of vocabulary: It's always the quiet ones that have it. (Also, don't serial criminals get the coolest nicknames?)

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

indeed they do haha

[CHRIS ANDES]

nice write
yes a total of mixed up but of great emotions
=]

[That_Girl]

Liked the content a lot... something I haven't seen too much of here. There were a few mistakes like 'to/too' and 'there/their/they're' but nothing major. Good job!

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

can you point them out so i may fix them? haha

[That_Girl]

Sure! Give me just a sec...

[That_Girl]

Second stanza, line one: 'to' should be 'too'
Sixth stanza, line three: 'there' should be 'their'

I think that was all.... nothing big. :)

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

haha thank you :3

[That_Girl]

No problem!