Between The Lines

Between The Lines

A Poem by Moflo
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Just an idea I had

"
What you see
Has gone through so many filters
That by the time it is deemed ready to reach your eyes
It has begun to represent a completely different idea altogether.

© 2011 Moflo


Author's Note

Moflo
I'm hoping that last line is almost impossible to read...otherwise the whole piece is a failure, in my opinion.

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This is not a failure, but a work of art. I'm not sure what to think, what to see or what to feel.. which only makes this so much more intriguing. Well done, you have talent even in short poem's as such. Continue on with your works, they are pleasing to read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This was not a failure at all. It was art and you have talent. Loved reading this piece thank you for sharing it!

Best,

Laurara Monique
( http://lauraramargosian.com/ )

Posted 4 Years Ago


Moflo

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
A thought provoking piece. Well penned...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moflo

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Great piece! It definitely gives me something to ponder.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Moflo

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
The poem has turned the optician's eye chart into a metaphor for control of what we see. Very clever. Or makes the reader feel he is clever for reading so much into this short piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nope, not a failure. Just a good poem sifted of all unimportant words. Great thought.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the concept...your work is always creative and fresh so im not suprised. good s**t

Posted 7 Years Ago


awesome write man :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


very nice to read. with wishes.

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is artful!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Interesting!!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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