Between The Lines

Just an idea I had

What you see
Has gone through so many filters
That by the time it is deemed ready to reach your eyes
It has begun to represent a completely different idea altogether.

Author's Note

I'm hoping that last line is almost impossible to read...otherwise the whole piece is a failure, in my opinion.

Reviews

[Vinyl Affair]

This is not a failure, but a work of art. I'm not sure what to think, what to see or what to feel.. which only makes this so much more intriguing. Well done, you have talent even in short poem's as such. Continue on with your works, they are pleasing to read.

[Nath]

I really liked this one, the formating is great, with the lines getting smaller - plays nicely with the idea of reading (the tiny lines) between the lines... I think.
The original changing into something different when it is filtered... I believe when things are edited that way they may in deed turn into something entirely different from what they started out as.

[Joiedevivre]

man, i know, its never done!!

[Amata Luna]

Now here I've read it from bottom to top and I find it really cool. What a nice piece of art. :)

[Etoiles]

Wow, love it, it's so unique :)
I love the presentation with such agreeable symmetry to the words.

:)

[Amanda Lee/ Isolated Dr..]

Excellent perception

[Cassie Fraga]

coooooool!! makes you think....

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is original! I read it twice!.. My perception of this is that my eyesight may be getting bad...the last line is tiny! lol Nice concept. :)

[Robin]

the reality of perception

[Stammers]

Good idea, or at least, what's left of it ;)

[qaralynn]

Very original and I enjoyed reading this! =) Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!