Between The Lines

Between The Lines

A Poem by Moflo
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Just an idea I had

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What you see
Has gone through so many filters
That by the time it is deemed ready to reach your eyes
It has begun to represent a completely different idea altogether.

© 2011 Moflo


Author's Note

Moflo
I'm hoping that last line is almost impossible to read...otherwise the whole piece is a failure, in my opinion.

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This is not a failure, but a work of art. I'm not sure what to think, what to see or what to feel.. which only makes this so much more intriguing. Well done, you have talent even in short poem's as such. Continue on with your works, they are pleasing to read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This was different for you...thanks for the random read. xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


such a true message... and creative a way of illustrating the perspective beyond using language

Posted 12 Years Ago


loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Absolutely brilliant, much enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh well Its visible..lol! but the lines conveyed a lot..it could mean, a person after many years of filtration becomes distilled enough to become separated of all his components and ultimately turns invisible/different to himself :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is not a failure, but a work of art. I'm not sure what to think, what to see or what to feel.. which only makes this so much more intriguing. Well done, you have talent even in short poem's as such. Continue on with your works, they are pleasing to read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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