Poets' Forum -- Compilation Collaboration

Poets' Forum -- Compilation Collaboration

A Poem by MomzillaNC
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By, MomzillaNC, Jordan, KLGoode, Ploughboy, Sindu, and Frieda P.

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The soulless stealing another's gifts

Gifts they lack because

They've emptied their souls 

In pursuit of greed…  -- from MomzillaNC by D. Denise Dianaty



Insatiable beasts become them 

Black hole hearts and gaping abyss minds  -- from Jordan


slack-jawed lies' post mortem, 

scooped hollow; nothing left to find -- from KLGoode


Jousting jesters, whose tepid quest;

to steal those lines they cherish best

from those who slave to find the words

then force-feed us the bitter curds -- from Ploughboy


True unsung heroes of shadows

pour ink in blood and sweat

string words with every breath

measly mice; thieves of dark

greedy vice; plague the lark -- from Sindu


Word salad nightmares at best

in forgery's counterfeit fallen ink

lying, cheating, cancer reapin'  Jesus freaking,

shouldn't fornicate where you pray

Thinking this Poets' Forum was benign?

Think again! -- from Frieda P

© 2015 MomzillaNC


Author's Note

MomzillaNC
This is a compilation of lines in a collaboration on the theme of plagiarism.

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Interesting when put this way. As writing is a little random I tend to relate to Frieda's for reasons unknown to me I like the fact that her paragraph may have physical intenions. What I do know from the subject and my relation to the site is that is sad that the site does not seem to feel the same level of passion for writin as the writers that come to use the site. So it was left unclear to me as if repudiation could just be a momentary thing. Nothing could stop the user from continuing in his empty journey.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I know who you speak of Red, they banned his nasty a*s, but he had threatened physical harm before t.. read more
redflutterby

9 Years Ago

Ive been on other sites that use IP tracking for the purpose of eliminating fake and harassing profi.. read more
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

There's only one way to make the developers act: hit them in their pockets. Take the complaints, the.. read more



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What lovely work. Thumps up

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Thieves
Of the worse type
Pretending to advance
The creative dialogue
With stolen words.

Which
They know nothing
Beyond they like it.

Seeking glory
For their stolen fruits
That leaves
A rancid taste
In the reader's mind.

Polluting the waters
We draw our inspiration
Killing the sharing
Of our gifts.

May you experience
The sorrows and pain
Which your act
Has caused
A thousand folds.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

I = the personal pronoun, "I"
K = 'know"
R = "right"

It's just part of the .. read more
therisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you, never seen it used before.
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.
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ANM
Job well done I think...plagarists beware!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ANM

9 Years Ago

Ouch.......
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Sheesh, say what you mean already, lol.:)
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

;P .................
Intriguing, I think is the best way to describe this.All the different stanzas written by the different authors, it's very nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Great compilation from all of you. its sad really - I actually remember when I first joined this site Charlie Konsor listened. Then there was this horrid site wide crash - people lost work - and couldn't retrieve it. Some of the old guard left for other sites and there was this influx of emo-kids and stalk and slash writers - some of us stayed on...I do love this place. I kinda hate the site itself - we used to be able to put up backgrounds - there were less banners and more real activity - but the people here - that's why I stay. I sift through the glut of schlock fodder to get to the good stuff. It does piss me off that they don't move faster when someone is clearly a threat to the real writers here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you. And, I do wish they'd give you more creative control over formatting and more options. As.. read more
Ha Ms Pickle's ending to this really creative collaboration has the pants scared off me, so beware any other plagarists!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

That was a terrific denouement!
Wow! This turned out great! We all have lot of anger for those plagiarists .. Haha
Not at all a benign forum!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

It really did turn out rather well and delightfully pointed. Thanks for contributing. Make sure you .. read more
Sindu

9 Years Ago

Absolutely will do! I'm happy I contributed.
so many great poets together,, nice to see,, a brilliant piece that conveys its msg well :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Interesting when put this way. As writing is a little random I tend to relate to Frieda's for reasons unknown to me I like the fact that her paragraph may have physical intenions. What I do know from the subject and my relation to the site is that is sad that the site does not seem to feel the same level of passion for writin as the writers that come to use the site. So it was left unclear to me as if repudiation could just be a momentary thing. Nothing could stop the user from continuing in his empty journey.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I know who you speak of Red, they banned his nasty a*s, but he had threatened physical harm before t.. read more
redflutterby

9 Years Ago

Ive been on other sites that use IP tracking for the purpose of eliminating fake and harassing profi.. read more
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

There's only one way to make the developers act: hit them in their pockets. Take the complaints, the.. read more

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