Dote

Dote

A Poem by MondaineGarcon

We’ll take it where the taking takes the pined

I like girls with lefty minds and hefty behinds

Maybe we can dance or maybe unwind

I like your thoughts like buying products of your kind


You’re someone irresistible

But I guess you’ll question time

If you care to dig, you’ll dig a goldmine


We’ll bake it or snare an animal for dined

I like girls with lefty minds and hefty behinds

Maybe we can laugh and laugh all the time

I like your thoughts and you’re probably a good dime


You’re someone indivisible

But I guess you’ll question mine

If you dare to care you’ll see I’m stupid for you beyond time


We’ll shake when the shaking winds arrive

In good time we’ll make our relationship like good wine

Maybe we can just be ourselves for once

And pounce on each other like best of pals in trust


You’re someone I miss like hell

But I guess you’ll question time

If you’re fair you will fare pretty fine


Let go of chains

And stop feigning all the time

You’re someone I kissed you belle

But I guess you’ll always question time

But you’re the b***h I will always want as mine

© 2019 MondaineGarcon


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Love it. Good luck with the girl!


Posted 1 Week Ago


MondaineGarcon

1 Week Ago

thanks starfish!
Good luck pinning her down. Sounds like you're hooked and she's not so certain. My fav lines are 'Let go of chains and stop feigning all the time'.

Good read!

Posted 1 Week Ago


MondaineGarcon

1 Week Ago

oh i'll totally get her. bad girls don't run.
love it...a sardonic, sarcastic and bitter love poem....
one of those we say to ourselves...like joan jett sang "i hate myself for loving you"
wicked fun with this poem.
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


MondaineGarcon

1 Week Ago

dude, joan jett is still really amazing in concert. i saw her a couple years ago. highly HIGHLY reco.. read more

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i try to write everyday and to write about everyday things. I've actually been writing a lot in the exploitation genre lately. got caught up with John Waters and August Underground and all that te.. more..

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