A Poem by MondaineGarcon

We’ll take it where the taking takes the pined

I like girls with lefty minds and hefty behinds

Maybe we can dance or maybe unwind

I like your thoughts like buying products of your kind

You’re someone irresistible

But I guess you’ll question time

If you care to dig, you’ll dig a goldmine

We’ll bake it or snare an animal for dined

I like girls with lefty minds and hefty behinds

Maybe we can laugh and laugh all the time

I like your thoughts and you’re probably a good dime

You’re someone indivisible

But I guess you’ll question mine

If you dare to care you’ll see I’m stupid for you beyond time

We’ll shake when the shaking winds arrive

In good time we’ll make our relationship like good wine

Maybe we can just be ourselves for once

And pounce on each other like best of pals in trust

You’re someone I miss like hell

But I guess you’ll question time

If you’re fair you will fare pretty fine

Let go of chains

And stop feigning all the time

You’re someone I kissed you belle

But I guess you’ll always question time

But you’re the b***h I will always want as mine

© 2019 MondaineGarcon

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sounds like you 'll be shakin' it up and having a good time i n this the rhyme and rhythm here..

nice work

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 Months Ago

thanks! i actually wrote this to be sang to the same chords as Green Day's song Good Riddance, lol.
Love it. Good luck with the girl!

Posted 5 Months Ago


5 Months Ago

thanks starfish!
Good luck pinning her down. Sounds like you're hooked and she's not so certain. My fav lines are 'Let go of chains and stop feigning all the time'.

Good read!

Posted 5 Months Ago


5 Months Ago

oh i'll totally get her. bad girls don't run.
love it...a sardonic, sarcastic and bitter love poem....
one of those we say to joan jett sang "i hate myself for loving you"
wicked fun with this poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


5 Months Ago

dude, joan jett is still really amazing in concert. i saw her a couple years ago. highly HIGHLY reco.. read more

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Added on September 13, 2019
Last Updated on September 13, 2019



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