Not Perfect

Not Perfect

A Poem by Monners

I'm not brave enough to know that it'll all be fine

I need constant reassurance that tomorrow I'll still be okay

And sometimes I ask too much of you

And want you around all the time

But it's only because you are the only one that can make it all better

You pick me up when I fall and hold me close when I'm hurting

No, I'm not okay

Or courageous

Or confident

But you make me feel like some day I could be

And I thank you for that

 

© 2008 Monners


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It's nice to have such a person around...someone who believes in you unconditionally...even when you think you're no good at all. With their encouragement, it's easier to face life's troubles.

Nice write.
Well described.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem, it speaks of what, hopefully, our friends do for us, bringing out the feeling that if we aren't all we want to be, they make us feel like someday we can be. It's a great compliment to your friend. Great read! Barbara

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this one it is a wonderful peice that rings from the heart. You can tell that this came from some place deep inside where we burry the stuff we don't normally let others see. Wonderful job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this. it is simple truth, but beautiful and hopeful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I felt your hope. Having someone who picks you up when you are down, even if just for a little while. This poem is short, not fancy, written in simple terms - making it easy to take in and think about.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Monners
Monners

Chicago, IL



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