B-s**t

B-s**t

A Poem by lovergirl
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I met someone i like and that's what icame up with when i thought of him the other night ;) the B is for bull so B-s**t is bullshit :p

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you say you love me you say you care
but i say this is just B-s**t ,
sorry if i'm not being fair
i'm sure you didn't mean it ,
because there's so much we haven't share *so let me tell you the one thing you get
me and you we're going no where
if you keep repeating the crapy s**t
so stand by and just stare
maybe one day you get the bet that you set the last time we met
and i made you swear to not love me or even care at least not just yet  ;)

© 2013 lovergirl


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I like the honesty in this piece - as if your thoughts spilled from your heart right onto the page.
"I made you swear to not love me or even care at least not just yet'

I love that line - "at least not yet" - leaving your heart open for the future.

:) Julie


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

8 Years Ago

thank you darling for your review ;)



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...at least not just yet....loved this...protecting yourself...smart

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

8 Years Ago

glad you liked it ;) thanks for the review
Wow this was amazing! I saw so much emotion and sadness and there were a few typos. but nothing unfix able... It was still great though!
So keep on being awesome and keep up the great work!

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

8 Years Ago

thank tou so much for your amazig review i appreciate it ;)
So sorry to see such a sweet soul have to deal with the Bull S#!t
but poetry is a great way to express your feelings and emotions.

Do you need a new gallon of milk?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

8 Years Ago

hh yes i always find my way out in poetry ;)
and this one is such an old gallon it's the firs.. read more
I like the honesty in this piece - as if your thoughts spilled from your heart right onto the page.
"I made you swear to not love me or even care at least not just yet'

I love that line - "at least not yet" - leaving your heart open for the future.

:) Julie


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

8 Years Ago

thank you darling for your review ;)
beautiful poem enjoyed reading it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

9 Years Ago

thanks , i'm glad you did
Fast-paced. Nice rhythm. Interesting tone. I enjoyed it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

9 Years Ago

thanks for this comment ;)
Lol, Don't you think, it's a funny write... ! Lol, i enjoyed reading this, i love the honesty lol ;) Yeh it's a great way to express reality even you know everybody says I love you and I like you and what so ever.. but in today's world am sure there's hardly very few people living who know the true meaning of love. I felt the write even i read the piece twice a time so i'm now gonna save this write because it's so true and a heartfelt write written from the heart, concept came from the reality i felt it. Well, i hope you're of your words... Lol you used in the poem. Keep following the words of you own heart and living the life every day with a new challenge in life, because every day brings some challenge for everyone to live on and those who accept the challenge what life brings for... they know the meaning of life how beautiful is this... and how beautiful the nature's where every living's enjoying the day without any fear in life. A clear sight of words i've see from you, though the piece by your poem. I really enjoyed the piece of writing. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Horizons

10 Years Ago

Welcome! Yeh, this's a life and it's you know been overcrowded by too many types of species... Inclu.. read more
lovergirl

10 Years Ago

you are totaly right for all what you said , and thank you you'll be reading my writing soon enough .. read more
Horizons

8 Years Ago

... would be a very pleasurable honor to me to read your beautiful new writes. I find it all very in.. read more

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