Wasted Scars; Watching Stars

Wasted Scars; Watching Stars

A Poem by Jessie
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Pantumn style.

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What is it you create
You, who watches stars,
You, who only wait,
Just staring at scars?

You, who watches stars
Fade away from light,
Just staring at scars,
Hope someday they might

Fade away from light.
Avoiding the memories' glare,
Hope someday they might,
They might meet us there.

Avoiding a memories' glare,
Lock it all up, so secretly,
They might meet us there,
We could give them the key.

Lock it all up, so secretly,
Behind a mask of words,
We could give them the key,
To our heart, torn in thirds

Behind a mask of words,
Please, tell all you know
To our heart torn in thirds,
Plant the seeds, let them grow.

Please, tell all you know,
As we wait behind these bars,
Plant the seeds, let them grow,
With the fading of our scars.

You, who watches stars
You, who only wait,
Just staring at scars,
What is it you create?

© 2011 Jessie


Author's Note

Jessie
I'm very proud of this one. I'm hoping my band can make it into a song one day.

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Wow. Beautiful. I love it dear. Should make a great song. BTW, when is the band stuff going to happen? :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on October 3, 2011
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Tags: scars, stars, pantum, pantumn, rhyming

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I am a faerie princess. I grant wishes if you make me smile. I like long walks on the shorelines of other dimensions. I chase after words like butterflies and tie them to paper, and watch my poetry fl.. more..

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