Cemetery Morning

Crows call sky to pines

Among the assembled dead--

A cacophony of stones

Reviews

[emmajoy]

I have such a vivid picture in my mind, but - in turn. have to turn it upside down and focus on what's been suggested, carried into the present. Those dead, wept over by dark garbed creatures, raucous in their grief. Three short lines loaded with meaning, each to his or her own interpretation.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Very impressive piece. Extraordinary lines!

[SkinlessFrank]

i feel it in my bones Carl

[Verser]

Me, too, Frank...Thanks. By the way, may I keep "Metamorphic" on file for a feature down the road?

[SkinlessFrank]

Sure. And my best wishes.

[Verser]

Best wishes to you for the new year, and many thanks.

--Carl

[zainul]

Depicted the morning in cemetery in a great poetic way.

[Ken Simm.]

Matisse could draw the perfect portrait in three lines. You have a similar incredible skill.
The information that is transmitted here.

[Verser]

Thanks, Ken. That's a really nice thing to say. I am trying to do we we all do...say the most we can in the fewest words...

[J. J. Nightingale]

Conversations .. of a spiritual nature
A gathering of the becoming ..
White noise rises ...

Well done !! ........ Jazz

[Verser]

I think what you wrote here is better than anything I wrote!

[J. J. Nightingale]

Lol ... Thank you .. you r so kind ..:)

[Jack Dawkins]

I like your poem very much because I admire the ability to paint a story in such words, much like W.C Williams and Ezra Pound.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"among the assembled dead-"

wow what a line...and what a thought "a cacophony of stones"

the dead speak and sing loud and clear...sometimes we just fail to hear them...but there is as story to tell...the crows try to remind us...but we just don't pay attention.

jacob

[Verser]

Thank you, jacob. As always, right to the heart of the matter, dead on.