To Whom It May Concern

To Whom It May Concern

A Poem by Jonny B. Mitchell
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A poem about self love, also featured in The Collection.

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      If I ask you for some precious time, will you give it without care?

      If I tell you that I need some space, will you let me breathe the air?

      If I give you my entire heart, will you cover it up from the rain?

      Or would my gift have been too quick to you, ending well in vain?

 

      If I make my life a better place, will you come in and take part?

      If I take my problems to the Source, will our love finally start?

      To Whom It May Concern, this poem is all about me

      Because, only I can make myself feel light, and happy and free.

© 2015 Jonny B. Mitchell


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it appealed to me as it is actually about our life and our own way of living it. also nice way of asking questions from the world

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is really creative and I really loved it!! It intrigued me when your lines ended with questions and they made the poem flow really well! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jonny B. Mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I actually struggled with the wording and I rewrote this a bunch of times. I'm glad you f.. read more

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Jonny B. Mitchell
Jonny B. Mitchell

Los Angeles, CA



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Born in Virginia but moved to California in 2004. Enjoys reading book version of movies. Loves motion seating in the theater. Camping, fishing and baseball top the list of most enjoyable acti.. more..

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