She's Amazing

She's Amazing

A Poem by Moses
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Describing the woman of my dreams!

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Long hair
Cute smile
She talks a lot
But I don't mind
Id give the world to her
My every dime
Shes wonderful
And I tell her every night
Two peas in a pod
We are
My life is a movie
She's the co-star
She's so hot
And
So smart
I couldn't rate her
She's off the charts
Smooth brown skin
And flawless features
Her dreamy eyes
Could make a man
Speechless
She's fly
But wingless
Shes my angel
Easily containing my inner demons
I just wana be with her
My sinful nature
Don't phase her
With her I could leave this earth
With her I feel so high
Like Skyscrapers
Together we shine brighter than
constellations
Bottom line
She's amazing

© 2012 Moses


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Thanx dude and i agree, I couldnt think of a replacement

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem has a really good flow to it. I can't quite put my finger on it. The "And" was the only part that felt out of place. But I really don't know what else could have been done with it. I liked the poem.

Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Moses
Moses

St. Petersburg, FL



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