I'm not Blind

I'm not Blind

A Poem by Mr. Lopez

I woke up this morning
And i was feeling kind of old
Thinking about the dreams i had lost
And some that i had sold
Can't help but wonder if this was
Part of some grand design
I might be a fool for love
But I'm not blind
 
Oh its just getting colder in this house
And the road's been much too long
I see her face in every crowd
I hear her name in every song
I'm starting to feel
Just a little left behind
I might be a fool for love
But I'm not blind
 
She ain't got room in her life
for the likes of me
I know that nothing in life
Is given away for free
I can always tell when shes got
Someone else on her mind
I might be a fool for love
But I'm not blind
 
Each day it's getting harder for me
To open up my eyes
I just keep getting the same results
After so many ties
Maybe I'm just afraid
Of what i might find
I might be a fool for love
But I'm not blind
 
Oh how the days a getting shorter
And its getting hard for me to breathe
I just hope that my prayers are heard
before its time for me to leave
I'm sinking faster now
And I'm getting closer to the line
I pray to the Lord I'll find love
Just one more time

© 2009 Mr. Lopez


Author's Note

Mr. Lopez
This was inspired by a Bob Dylan song

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Once being in love before I hope you do find it one more time. What an amazing feeling and emotion love is and everyone should be in it. The world would be a better place and maybe everyone would write poetry. Another fine write from you. Thanks for the read request. Sorry for the time it took but life just grab a hold of me and I had to do a few other things.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a really great piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah .... dear M.L. ... there is such a sense of sadness in this piece. Very lonely and emotional. I think once we let go of the "looking" for love, we stumble over it. If one has faith, it will present itself.

You continue to grow as a writer. Very well written piece... both in content and form. I think it would make a great song! Do you know anyone who writes music? Or do you? You should consider taking it a step further and making it into music. Seriously.

I see I have a lot of reading to catch up on...lol. I've been MIA for a bit, but will get to them all soon, for I do enjoy reading your work :)

Great piece!



Posted 15 Years Ago


Once being in love before I hope you do find it one more time. What an amazing feeling and emotion love is and everyone should be in it. The world would be a better place and maybe everyone would write poetry. Another fine write from you. Thanks for the read request. Sorry for the time it took but life just grab a hold of me and I had to do a few other things.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your writing is amazing, and always a nice, pleasant surprise. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love this piece!! Great Write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can definetely see where the whole Bob Dylan inspiration fits in; I really enjoyed this. Thumbs up!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you for bob dylan's inspiration. this was very good!! flowed like a song, and i enjoyed every line. a song about loving someone, knowing their love is not reciprocal. oh how it hurt. i know, i've been there.

Posted 15 Years Ago


you're never too old for love. I had a couple at my work who just recently got married and they are in their 60's.

a piece a lot can relate too. Love is a lot of work and sometimes can leave someone feeling defeated but the reward of that 'real thing' keeps us hoping. Emotional piece written from the heart my friend. Bob Dylan is a true inspiration.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I likd the structure in this one a lot. Especifically the fact that each stanza ended in 'but I'm not blind'. I really anjoyed this!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First of all, I think the rhythm and the pace match the tone in this poetic tune.

You have a way with the perfect closure in many of your poems. What can seem impossible, can be turned around, You always seem to have an undertone of hope.

If you truly want to make this into a song, you should expand it. You have the true makings of a song here.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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I was born in Texas October of 1966. Raised in California where i fell in love with music and art. I came from a large , poor family where the most valuable thing we ownwed was our love for each other.. more..

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