In a prayer

In a prayer

A Poem by Mr. Lopez


There were so many hearts opened
so many heads bowed in prayer
together in adoration
the faith of many become as one
so loud i would call out
as so far i would fall
Shattered and lifeless in my brokenness
I crawled through the haze of uncertainty
I fed from the trough of humility
Knowing countless paths yet know my print
Contless smiles yet know my name
but here i lie at the edge of times gorge
Where i see views of which depths 
Inspire reflectrion of
What was
What is
What could someday be
Time passes me by
on the backs of opportunity
Waving their fare thee wells
I ask only to be undone
I take hold of what i know to be true
where i become the final layer
And give it all away to God
In a prayer

© 2009 Mr. Lopez


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AMEN.... love the whole poem...awesome prayer...
amen again..

Posted 14 Years Ago


AMAZING!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh!!!! This is amazing! It's so good!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 20, 2009

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Mr. Lopez
Mr. Lopez

Chandler, AZ



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I was born in Texas October of 1966. Raised in California where i fell in love with music and art. I came from a large , poor family where the most valuable thing we ownwed was our love for each other.. more..

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