Alone

Alone

A Poem by Obed
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written to express the feeling of being alone even when the room is crowded. inspired by those lonely dinners, conversations with the person in the mirror, and falling asleep with out a good bye.

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Throwing down barriers,
acknowledging that I must go on,
some small
some misunderstood
other still stand.

Those that stand keep me insane.


A shining bright star told me
"Be strong for your heart will keep up,"
as years passed that star got smaller
with it went my belief
                  my patience.

Loosing all that I once had I became lonely.


People came and left
some friends others just faces
very few that I really loved
and in the end those left too
       leaving me with barriers
       leaving me alone. 

© 2010 Obed


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Very sad but well-written.
It's about time you start talking about these things.
You're never the only one and just because you are by yourself it doesn't mean you're alone.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Obed
Obed

Mexico



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Hello my name is Obed Magana, I'm 16 yrs old, and a very good friend convinced me of doing this. I don't write much but when i do it comes deep from inside. I hope you enjoy my writings. more..

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