My Laptop - Titled: To The Shadows I Run

My Laptop - Titled: To The Shadows I Run

A Poem by Mr.Six
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Its about my laptop, mouse, keyboard, screen, video card, battery, fan, dual core processor, front side bus, and my password! As always, enjoy! or utterly disapprove! :D

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Here lies a portal that will guide you to a false entity.
A world where rodents run rampant across streets of plastic,
And a board without keys is a man gone drastic.
To the shadows I run.

Where lithium flames scorch the skin
And desperate fans perspire,
Two beautiful minds, yet one burning desire.
To the shadows I run.

Where a lowly artist resides
Destined to travel only by bus,
They speak of Sir Radeon, he is not one of us.
To the shadows I run.

Mr.Six is the key,
The almighty chosen one.
He will never see light,
To the shadows I run.

© 2011 Mr.Six


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I. Love. This.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow. I didn't understand a few parts of this, but it was really cool. Very creative idea to write about your laptop. It's funny because it's what's sitting right in front of us the entire time that we're writing, but I don't think I've ever read a poem about a computer on WC before. Especially liked the second stanza.

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow makes no sense to me but I like it XD
nice flow :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this, i can also interupt this about life as well. Nicely written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hm. This was different, but interesting.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 3, 2011
Last Updated on April 16, 2011
Tags: to, the, shadows, i, run, video, game, gamer, technology, nerd, laptop, computer

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Mr.Six
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