Alone

Alone

A Poem by JR Darewood

I walk alone to the beat of my heart
  while the rest of you dance
sweaty, hips grinding to a rhythm i cannot hear
  watching me like ghosts
  phantasms of faces
  ethereal and formless 
  like zephyrs in the rain
I don't feel the drops 
  don't feel your gaze 
  don't hear your voice...
because that dull ache eclipses it all
  leaden in my heart
    it hurts.
But the only moment that i am me,
is when you all disappear.

© 2013 JR Darewood


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amazingly written keep it up !!

Posted 5 Years Ago


You can't help but feel it. Bravo.....................

Posted 6 Years Ago


Somber, sad, and relatable. Makes me think of my own depressive days. Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow this smacks you in the face and flips you over...felt it's chill, and I so get it....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Great work on this one, J. The last two lines are particularly resonant- a perfect end to a very good poem. Nicely done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


like zephyrs in the rain

LOVE that line

sometimes we need to be alone

even if momentarily

"to feel that moment of clarity"

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice poem. I like that you are highlighting the conflict between your social identity and your personal identity. And then you say "the moment you all disappear I am me." Why do you think the personal identity is more authentic? Is it due to the lack of social constraints that are imposed by the public?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yeah, I can feel this one on most nights. I have a love-hate relationship with being alone, but a mostly hate relationship with being in a crowd.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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JR Darewood

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