SideKick Moment 04.23.09A Poem by JasonJust walking around talking to myself and this is what came of that conversation (does that make me crazy?)
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Another nice poem Jason. I love your prespective on things. You have a common way of looking at an issuse but a creative way of explaining it. That is your gift don't ever lose it. Thanks for sharing!
Posted 15 Years Ago |
hey this is cute.... ok..honestly the first few lines... and i was like..z 0__o m... but lol...got it as it progressed... nice metaphors... the ending being the most powerful and beautiful part of the piece.. The Brightest stars are your eyes
Only those who can with stand the glare Will receive love without compromise. nice usage of words...and a fun read... :) Posted 15 Years Ago |
Love without compromise--i love this part, it is a great ending thought that leaves me pondering and wanting you to give me more of your playful words. But my favorite part is the beginning of your poem it is bold and it catches your audiences attention indefinently...It reminds me of a song called "Customer" by Raheem DeVaughn..i love him by the way lol..but there is a section that mirrors what his song speaks of..I really enjoyed the read...
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart! Posted 15 Years Ago |
This is a very creative piece. I particularly liked your play on words. Nice write.
Posted 15 Years Ago |
Quite original and creative. I loved it! Nicely done Jason. It makes you think quite a bit.
You neighbor in words, Mae Posted 15 Years Ago |
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Added on April 24, 2009
Last Updated on May 22, 2009
15 Reviews
Added on April 24, 2009
Last Updated on May 22, 2009
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Jason
Philadelphia, PA
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Im 25 from the 2.ONE.5 (Philadelphia). One of the many shades of "black" comprise the color of my skin. No kids No woman, just really good friends. Ok the top part of my Bio was when I didn't think.. more..Writing
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