Paper Crucible

Paper Crucible

A Poem by MrJodie
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Heated, smelted, poured, shaped, tempered, smashed, heated, smelted...

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Unique destiny

To sacrifice yourself here

For others to read

© 2008 MrJodie


Author's Note

MrJodie
This is lovingly dedicated to every heart on Writer's Cafe. I appreciate what you bravely do.

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What a treasure you are! To be inspired by anothers writing, regardless of if you know them or not is a gift indeed and your write and inspire. I'm glad I came across you and that writers heart of yours! As far as commenting on this piece write now. I will wait for after the contest, that way no one will think I am playing favorites lol.

Have a great day MrJodie!
Missy

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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wow, the title is perfect and really enhances the words within the poem itself. beautiful dedication

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oh How Lovely.... you are a sweetheart !!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great senryu and great dedication.
So many writers use their words as their heart on their sleeve - as they should.
And it is their experiences that has given them that opportunity or 'destiny'.
Good work!



Posted 15 Years Ago


Truly awesome work, I love this!

jkb

Posted 15 Years Ago


There is a lot of strength in those few lines. It's a precise statement. Very encouraging, although I don't know why.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a treasure you are! To be inspired by anothers writing, regardless of if you know them or not is a gift indeed and your write and inspire. I'm glad I came across you and that writers heart of yours! As far as commenting on this piece write now. I will wait for after the contest, that way no one will think I am playing favorites lol.

Have a great day MrJodie!
Missy

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a great inspiration! This is good. Thank you for all your support! What a true poet you are!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amen, Jodie! Same to you. May we continue to inspire one another in our great quest....

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

As do you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amen! thank you for the dedication, support and reviews.. These words say one thing... this is a man has been inspired by our words and courage.. as well as he has blessed us!

thank you mr. jodie

much love n respect

-Lalli

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 11, 2008
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MrJodie
MrJodie

Troutdale, OR



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I live in Troutdale, Oregon, a suburb of Portland. I'm currently working as a computer systems administrator for a manufacturing company in Vancouver and write only as a hobby. However, I've dreamed.. more..

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