Everlasting Passion

Everlasting Passion

A Poem by The Elusive Mr Dunne

"Everlasting Passion"

(My dedication to Hip-Hop Music)

It got to the point, that I had nothing to lose/
So I made a choice, to do the things that I do
I fought and I fought, yet I never thought it through/ 
But now I can see a future, and that future's in you
You slew blue with your beauty, making cute out of the vile/
I can see the truth in your eyes, and in your beautiful smile
I used to be so brokenhearted, I didn't know who to trust/
I so yearned to let it burn, and now it's all ashes and dust
Now that misery has departed, it's you I love and I lust/
Every touch and every thrust, has got me high with a rush/
I love the way you cuss out my enemies, and don't give a ****/
You've been such a good friend to me, and shown nothing but love
Even when my soul had been sold, so I was too cold to feel much/
You were there to hold me down, with a loving kiss and a hug
I love how you read in-between the lines, and see through my eyes/
You've been on my mind most of my life, so will you be my valentine?

Copyright 2015 The Elusive Mr Dunne (All rights reserved)

© 2022 The Elusive Mr Dunne

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I liked the movement of words and thoughts. Good energy and drive to these words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.

Posted 1 Year Ago

I think the moral of this poem is push through to to the things you love, and not hesitate about it; it's always best, in my opinion, to live your dram; and, if you can live it with someone you love, all the better.
nice job!
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago

Okay. Interesting. Hip hop music personified as a woman...
You have a very... unique... muse. Rather earthy I should say.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on February 16, 2022
Last Updated on February 16, 2022
Tags: Passion, Love, Hip-hop, Rap, Poetry, Writing, Spoken Word, Valentine's Day, Dedication


The Elusive Mr Dunne
The Elusive Mr Dunne

London, South East, United Kingdom

Mr Dunne Poetry (Crown Court Censored Poet) ➡ Jailed for Poetry (2008) ➡ Banned at Court (2009-2014) ➡ Author of 20 Books! ➡ Actor #RealLifeTVUK (YouTube, Sky TV, .. more..