Butting Heads

Butting Heads

A Poem by Mr. Lopez

The conditions of interaction
Could be off by just a fraction
Was it in my stance?
Or words of choice?
Perhaps the timbre in my voice?
It's a matter it's a fact
It's in the way we interact
Let's not jump to conclusions
Open up your mind
But first impressions with aggression?
I'll respond in kind
Try you should to stop and think
You might see that we share a link
Instead of seeking to place blame
You'll find that we are much the same

© 2017 Mr. Lopez

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I love this!! I love what it speaks but also how it reads! My mind enjoys a thoughtful rhyme! I know not all poems need to but I get excited when they do!! Great write! Awesome job!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Unforced rhyming. Not bad. My favorite bit was;
"It's a matter it's a fact
It's in the way we interact".
Rolls of the tongue in song.

Great write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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