On line writer

On line writer

A Poem by Mrudula Rani

Filtered emotions
In to perfect portions,
Packaged sentiments
Like an essence of exotic sorts,
Poured mind and heart,
Gave nuance to feel,
In trademark style!
Stuck a label; the title.
A pretty picture as well!
Pasted, and displayed it on line,
Expecting it speaks to some one!
And get reviews in return!

© 2018 Mrudula Rani


Author's Note

Mrudula Rani
Picture; An on line writer, Mrudula Rani.

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Not only are these words most apt and very often true, the whole poem is very well penned my lovely literary friend & poet....Lovely photo too............................Neville

Posted 5 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

Thank you dear Neville, muito Obrigada para tudo. Uma abraço.
Neville

5 Years Ago

And truly said......
I echo Barleygirl's words. We definitely have an on-line persona, which is a lot easier to cope with than the 'real macoy'! The line 'Expecting it speaks to some one' is very apt. Although I suspect that most of us write for ourselves too. Loved you word 'picture'.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

I haven't been writing on line very long ( mostly on any thing I get my hands on with a pen I used .. read more
Great Aunt Astri

6 Years Ago

Well, I wish you every best wish, and enjoy what you do. I have 'experimented' in many different sty.. read more
Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for the best wishes. I hope your not going stop writing soon, I will miss you.. read more
Here you have perfectly painted a picture of how it can go with those of us who do so much of our communicating online. We really do form an online personality that's nothing like what it means to actually interact in person. It's so much easier, hopefully, becuz we have our pre-determined persona here online, whereas in person we may be prone to total unpredictability! *smile* Online we can skip the arguments & just focus on the good feelings. Or maybe others are just looking for the arguments! Anyhow, your word picture describes it exactly as I experience it. I love the way you speak your truth (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Querida Margie,the online persona of most us is only an extension of our personality I believe. Bu.. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate that very much. When I do online reviewing here, it is a way for me to have .. read more
oh man! (i should say Woman!) ;0 i love this poem..great title that pulls on-liners right in ...the imagery is almost blissful ... and such an honest straight forward reaching out for readership ...and how we all do enjoy that eh!? its how we understand what works and what doesn't for a large group of people ... so glad to have met you
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

The feeling is mutual. And so glad I finally got the courage to express my admiration and respect fo.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

:) ....................
An amazing poem and pic. I feel someone is coming forward now in the light of poetry and sharing with love. Kudos.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Thank you my dear poet, and a dearest friend, you are always very kind.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome...

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Added on February 16, 2018
Last Updated on February 17, 2018
Tags: Writing, on line, sentiments