Benefaction

Gift of splendor,
Aids him excel with effluence.
Gift of splendor,
Transforms him ocean's tormentor.
Lovers bid him to revive romance,
Galant celestial assistance;
Gift of splendor.

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Your words soar!
Work to be admired!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you. dear jimmy, you are very kind.

[CD Campbell]

I like the mechanics of the poem. Love your use of language. I am having trouble with the use of "him" in lines 2 and 4 though. It makes those lines stutter to my ear when read aloud. Another good one.

[Mrudula Rani]

" him" I was referring to the Moon ... 2 in the morning filled the room with a flood of brilliance and made me wonder where would he be without Sun's gift of splendor. Thank you, CD. I appreciate your lovely review.

[emmajoy]

The wonder of Benefaction is that it wears many coats... and thus, fits all those, like Self, who need assurance that - who, how and what we believe in, MATTERS. Your brief poem is majestic.. wonderful, Mrudula.

' Gift of splendor, ~ Aids him excel with effluence. '

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear Emmajoy. Your reviews are a treat and I appreciate them very much.

[Paul Bell]

I think we all have gifts hidden somewhere.
If one of those gifts changed us overnight.
That would be our splendor.

[Mrudula Rani]

A personal splendor of our own to excel!

[Crowley]

This one could be taken many ways, that is one of the things that makes it so great. I like to think that the gifts of splendor we are given, if used to their fullest potential make the world a better place all the way around, regardless of who gave the gift. Really good piece!!!!

[Mrudula Rani]

I like your interpretation of the poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Neville]

You, my friend Mrudula, just keep getting better and better.. Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear Neville. Your kind words always make my day. Uma Abraço

[Neville]

I am truly glad of that, and my words are truly meant...

[Mrudula Rani]

Querido,I am very lucky to have your friendship and affection.

[Neville]

ditto... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words my friend. To know the splendor of perfect place. A honored place to know. Thank you Mrudula for sharing the amazing poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you John for your lovely review.