Orenda

Orenda

A Poem by Mrudula Rani

Spirit scintillates,
Sentience expends foundation;
Whensoever perceive yer.

© 2019 Mrudula Rani


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i especially like the title .. a tribute to the Iroquois Indian belief... i grew up in upstate NY and so my exposure to bits of their history was at least present ... i think history talks more of the Western tribes ...
i just finished watching Avatar (for the umpteenth time) yesterday and your poem is so all over the Na'vi belief in Eywa ...the connection of all things .. love that stuff .. i like the language and consonance you have chosen ... and God's spirit on Earth should be scintillating for sure ... heavy thoughts and you close with a kind of cute twist with a colloquial "...yer" :) inspiring, uplifting and challenging to seek the Spirit out this morning
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank you, dear E. for the most exhilarating review. I was fascinated by the word 'orenda' and its.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

ohhhh if you like sci-fi and magical thinking you will love it ;) when it came out it was in 3D and .. read more



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I guess the collective power of nature's energies is not to be sneezed at for if it can be harnessed in ones psyche one can reach a sentinel state of awareness where we can experience such satisfaction. Love this short but meaningful piece.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank you John, for sharing your thoughts.
i especially like the title .. a tribute to the Iroquois Indian belief... i grew up in upstate NY and so my exposure to bits of their history was at least present ... i think history talks more of the Western tribes ...
i just finished watching Avatar (for the umpteenth time) yesterday and your poem is so all over the Na'vi belief in Eywa ...the connection of all things .. love that stuff .. i like the language and consonance you have chosen ... and God's spirit on Earth should be scintillating for sure ... heavy thoughts and you close with a kind of cute twist with a colloquial "...yer" :) inspiring, uplifting and challenging to seek the Spirit out this morning
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank you, dear E. for the most exhilarating review. I was fascinated by the word 'orenda' and its.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

ohhhh if you like sci-fi and magical thinking you will love it ;) when it came out it was in 3D and .. read more
Your writing really does inspire us, me.. to look outwards, to look and find. As with that beautiful word - it rolls around the mouth like a truffle: in a lesser way, contributes a touch of that spirit energy that makes a person absorb more from the all around. Perhaps? . Still having to learn and understand..

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank you dear beautiful Emmajoy, for your always encouraging lovely thoughts. Eu adorei muito ( I .. read more
Like the idea of a spiritual energy pushing me along when I'm out running.
But the energy within is definitely the Ki energy.


Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Are you practicing qigong as well ?
Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

When I'm injured I do. The gentle exercise helps me back to fitness.
Hello Mrudula. You keep me on my toes dear poet. Had to look up Orenda, but so pleased I did. I have learned something today, and spiritual energy just has to be scintillating. All good wishes to you.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

The energy that flows from beautiful minds like yours has such a scintillating effect on me, dear Ch.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

3 Months Ago

You are more than welcome Mrudula.
That's why I'm a bunny.... bunnies just are and Robert's must be... a lot in a little kind of a riddle but definitely a tittle... ate

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

You read my mind ever so perfectly. Dear Robert. Thank you.

I think yer got summat ere....

eloquently penned me friend..... Neville x

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Thank you for that lovely thought, Dear Neville.

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