Right Time and Place in Life

Trying out "Step-down, Etheree style". Rules: Each succeeding line is one syllable longer than the line before it. Total number of syllables used must be 55.

Right Time and Place in Life.


The
One way
to  look  at
Me  is  to  see
Me as soul that flies
Freely  into  the  Face
Of my life's challenges,and
Know it's the right place that I need
To  be  for  what  life's  giving  me  to
Love,  remember,  and  smile  so  gladly  at. 

Reviews

[MsMermaid]

Yeah, the layout of the poem is call Step Down, Etheree style. Each line is one syllable longer than the previous line and the entire poem must have only 55 syllables. Sometimes it's fun to do a specific style discipline. I notice a lot of poets here just like to do the prose free style... no need for meter... no need for rhyme. But it should be more artistic than just conversational style. To me that's just a cop out for people that don't want to go to the effort it takes to write poetry. That's just my opinion. Some prose is well done, but most are not.

[Kim's Poems]

Love the layout of this write,
This is really Good, amazing write!

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow this is amazing! i love this :)) mind checking out some of my work? thanks :)