Kiss the Girls

...a reflection of war

Kiss the Girls

 

 

He was calling from Afghanistan,

his second tour of duty.
They spoke in a universal shorthand
mostly about the house,
how much the oldest had his chin
and how the twins were beginning to crawl.

The last words she recalls from him
was ''I’m alright…”

 

 

“…kiss the girls”.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Soft tears of empathy well-up from the sheer sweet sadness emanating from your skillfully selected and placed words and the forlorn and lonely picture, Kelly … you touched my heart, and almost broke it with your final line.
If you've a mind to, there is a wee one on my pages about war you might find touching, too.
"I Prayed" http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RichardJ/1634830/

Thank you, Dear Kelly … you are precious and beyond! 〜 Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am deeply touched you enjoyed this, as it is indeed, very special. Thank you, Richard!

[Richard🖌]

A pleasure, Kelly! : )

[R Smith]

beautifully sad Kelly, you tell a masterful story and give enough to let us see the sadness of its ending without the need for explanation, great writing :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

The subject of the matter touches me as much as it does my reader...thank you, Richard!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Sad poem and it must also be hard to leave your family behind. I would not be so strong. Thank you for sharing this excellent poem, Kelly. :) Rudi

[Kelly Scheppers]

San Diego is a big naval town, and deploys many men and women to service for months at a time. The news stations here always film them leaving, with their families at hand...but the joy comes in their return to port! My brother used to be one of those men, and even in the best of circumstances, it is most difficult to leave. Thank you, Rudi!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

My pleasure, Kelly. :) Rudi

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand this poem. I left the service after 14 years to be able to see my kids. The military is cool for the single people. Soldiers can miss their kids growing-up. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

Many thanks to you, as well, John!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Kelly.

[Kelsey Ann]

It's so beautiful and tragic! And, sadly, it is based in truth. Superb piece :D

[Kelly Scheppers]

I get chills whenever I read over it. Thank you, Kelsey!

[Ruth]

So emotive, your writing always places me in that situation, heartfelt and saddening, in many ways :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hearing from you always restores a smile from within...thank you, Poppy.

[andrew mitchell]

Power stuff Kelly! Emotionally explosive and scary!

[Kelly Scheppers]

It is a little scary, knowing how often it plays out. You are so kind to review...thank you my friend!

[andrew mitchell]

ITS My pleasure reviewing your fine work of art!

[Chirag Kumar]

A very touching poem which speaks of intense emotions. Thanks for sharing :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for your review, Chirag!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... The essence of war can be like
feathers blowing in the wind....
all the intimacies shared... snuffed out
before their time.... You have captured
the loss in a sweet but sad reflection of
family left with memories mirrored across
the miles. truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

I like to post something every now and then to honor our men and women for their service and sacrifice. I know I am forever grateful. Thank you, Pat!

[Patricia Wedel]

So true Kelly... We are forever in their embrace.. truly, Pat

[alifeacoustic]

A beautiful reflection of reality in an unreal situation. Not speaking of where, or the danger, but the littlest things that matte most. Both sides silent in fear of what might be, stick to the comforts of what they miss most.
A beautiful moment captured here. Thank you for sharing.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your insight gives me cause to be proud of what I've written. Often times I feel most fortunate when that is reciprocated to me from my reader. It was kind of you to say. Thank you!

[alifeacoustic]

You're very welcome.