Looking at your love while they lie sleeping, and you overwhelmed with love for them. Taking in the length of their eye lashes, the fullness of their lips and the curl of their wayward hair. I've been there. Wonderful write Kelly.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
It certainly does take me back! Thank you, Chris!
6 Years Ago
Nice to remember. With the passing of years you sometimes forget those very, very special moments.
Don't wait its never to late to make it count even in the middle of the night it will be all right to tell him that important information that just can't wait till morning light.
I read this poem and I smiled. You know how to get away with words and capture your readers so greatly and make them feel the exact same thing you are feeling whilst writing. Keep going and one day, soon you will author a book.
Somehow, I think it would be very much appreciated to wake up to such validation.
Future favors the bold. :)
Then again, tomorrow's another day, and rested bones find opportunity.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Such validation is difficult to conceal...especially when the eyes meet. Many thanks, David!
very emotive on the surface and between the lines .. stark reminder to me to wake them up and tell them ..before they are missed from our lives .. the pic is very good .. at the center ..the cross ... something we all need to make happen ... many examples in Religion of the sanctity of sex ;) .. the songs of Solomon leap to mind .. wonderful work Ms Kelly!
E.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
You are as good as sunshine for the warmth you bring...thank you, E!
I remember acting this way on many occasions. Wonderful depiction and imagery.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Please let me know what to call you. I feel a proper introduction should be made for the kindness y.. read morePlease let me know what to call you. I feel a proper introduction should be made for the kindness you've shown!
8 Years Ago
I'm known as 'Mad' to those on here who've known me a while. Quite apt really as I'm as mad as a bag.. read moreI'm known as 'Mad' to those on here who've known me a while. Quite apt really as I'm as mad as a bag of spanners. ( Did you like all the "as" I used there ?)
Actually I like both! That's quite an unusual name, though...very gentlemanly!
8 Years Ago
Oh thank you dear lady. I was actually named after Clive of India. My mum hadn't realised Clive was .. read moreOh thank you dear lady. I was actually named after Clive of India. My mum hadn't realised Clive was his surname, but I like it. No one ever manged to make it shorter as a nick name at school.