Dominion

Dominion

 

 

 

He was jealous

of rain that fell upon her

of night when she slept 
for the time it had taken her

away from him.

 

Jealous

of shadow and light,

how intrusively they played upon

a monopoly of skin
sequestering the inventory

of a stare. 

And he was jealous

of other men before him

 

of the prefix of syllables

lying in wait upon her tongue,

 

coveting her every word

like the dominion of a priest

to a confession.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

wow Kelly!! so well done says i! the subtlety and powerful, emotive imagery in the emotional scene ... puts me behind his eyes ... i have never ... ever read such a thorough examination of possessive, jealous obsession ... i think you were in the muse with this one ..thanks for sharing my friend!! its golden!
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your presence here is most welcomed, Gene...and one I always look forward to. Thank you!

[Jibey]

This is a beautifully crafted poem which explores and intrigues... The imagery and ideas blend together in a striking reflection of a jealous lover's desire to possess and control... Not a happy thought but real enough... 'Jealous of the prefix of syllables lying in wait''... That certainly made me sit up and think... The priestly analogy said much to me too. A strong, powerful poem.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your reviews truly make my day, Jibey. Thank you!

[mattavelli]

Hello, Kelly! :)
She must be very special, and he needs to breathe and keep himself under control. I think he has some issues.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you so much!

[Dave]

It is too bad that the person doesn't understand that if you truly love someone, they must have their freedom. They can't possibly love you back if they feel everything they say or do will come under negative scrutiny. I hope this is what you were getting at.

Take care - Dave

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Dave. It certainly is a topic well defined in the feedback I am getting.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... I read your poem as a positive feeling... it can be a poetic
gesture. However in real life, it would depend on whether he (or she)
would mentally abuse his or her peace of mind. We are attracted to each other
by nature; so it takes maturity and a sensibility to keep the attraction within limits.
It takes a lot of confidence in oneself to be secure, and it is a blessing when the
partner protects that sensibility. Therein lies the pearl of wisdom. I do see the beauty
of admiration in your poem. To be like gentle rain on your lover is a gift to be
cherished always in a storm or on a quiet summer day. truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

It was all but a thought in my head, derived from pure conjecture. I suppose a little jealousy can be seen as healthy, but the obsessive and abusive nature of it can sometimes override the good. Thank you for such a deep perspective, Pat!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh Scheppers can the sweep of words carry one to the exotic flame of wonder!

Love,
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

Alfred! Hello!!! How are you? No, no, let me answer that...you are over-the-moon-happy and in love, right? Yes! Good for you, my friend. Much love to you both...and please keep in touch, ok?

[Alfred Kukitz]

Always I will keep in touch. Moving to New Hampshire tomorrow to send the warm months, North Carolina in the winter. We love like the very kid in each of us.
Regards,
Al

[Cherrie Palmer]

Excellent presentation, your image flows and builds accordingly. those who desire to pose never get to enjoy the true beauty and depth of person they desire.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Cherrie...always a pleasure having you here!

[Cherrie Palmer]

You never disappoint, you are a very talented woman.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you most kindly, Cherrie!

[Stella Armour]

his insecurity will will either turn to violence or send her into hiding.... you just can't own another person or control them..

[Kelly Scheppers]

I agree with you, Stella. This was just conjecture on my part. Hopefully, I'll never really know.

[Stella Armour]

it does happen tho' men often do try to control their women ..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and there is nothing that will chase her away faster than kneeling in that confession and getting blasted by the priest for past digressions...even when they have nothing to do with present company.
Jealousy is such a disaster.
i have experienced it kill my relationships from both sides.
this is so well expressed in metaphors...the catholic guilt angle...and those syllables that get off mid-tongue because he already fills in blanks erroneously.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's a challenge for me to step back and perceive something I've never experienced. I think that's part of what being a poet is all about. Thanks, Jacob! ( ...that is a cow, right? )

[jacob erin-cilberto]

can't remember for sure if it's a bull or cow...might be a bull....but that is me on top of it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Jealousy can kill off love. We must allow love to be free like a butterfly and allow love to know free-range. If we lock the door and keep love stored away. She will run away from us. I loved your words dear Kelly. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you most kindly, John!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kelly.