Interesting, with some good word usage. It brought to mind a scenario in which, a woman and man meet in the context of an artistic pursuit of some kind. Perhaps, in the same dance group or an orchestra? Anyway, because the woman is possibly kind of new to all this, as a "novice"; it creates a barrier or tensions between herself and the guy she has eyes for? However, the guy is probably a snob; and doesn't know what he might be missing.! If he appreciated the woman enough, then her novice status in art; would not deter him! He seems to like her physical beauty, as is clearly suggested in verse four? Anyway, this is probably the best work which I have read by this authoress; so far.
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A mighty perceptive insight! Thank you!
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Well, I admit that I made a few intuitive guesses; as part of that insight. I genuinely think it's p.. read moreWell, I admit that I made a few intuitive guesses; as part of that insight. I genuinely think it's probably your best piece of writing, which I have seen; so far.
Hi Kell. I came by to visit. You found a pic that really suited the words and the thoughts. Life from the model's view.
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I am thrilled to see you, old friend. We've been here so long I believe we are fixtures! Lol, good .. read moreI am thrilled to see you, old friend. We've been here so long I believe we are fixtures! Lol, good to be in the pleasure of your company, Chris. Many thanks!
There is nothing I cherish more than coming back to You, following a prolonged hiatus away. This is said in an effort to convince you of the deeply joyous elation in your ever expanding amelioration of mastered prowess, donning a poetic pen, I feel all the way into my ever-smitten bones.
Ya know, concerning this piece(?), I perceive it in two distinct settings: One, with light humor, where the novice nude artist's model 🎨 is posing and being set-up by her scholarly pretentious, amateur artist. The other, a sensually stimulating moment shared between two inexperienced lovers ⚤ … both of whom wish to be considered sexually sophisticated, in which Nature takes due course after considerable enticing foreplay (stroking scars 'n imperfections, indulging in the contrast of shadow and light, and the like); whereafter, her "gown descended to the floor in a diaphanous pool." Sheer verbal magic, Poetess … scheesh!
No one, Dear Kelly, does poetic diction with the verve, originality, and class You do … succulent sensuality with just a tactile pinch enough deliciously discreet porno to set one's imaginative libido spinning and left melting into its socks.
On the other hand, I genuinely enjoy this playful smile, aroused by images of the hopeful, clueless model and pretentiously adept artist.
I can almost hear you snickering at my bumbling guesses; ah, well, some things never change … LOL!
Either way, M'Dear, beautifully done, as usual!
You never cease to amaze my senses … happy hugs 'n smiles! ⁓ Richard🖌
[that gorgeous artwork sure would make a thrilling statement displayed atop this sweet masterpiece]
150/100
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However am I to catch my breath after indulging in such a delicious review? Wow, I am flattered beyo.. read moreHowever am I to catch my breath after indulging in such a delicious review? Wow, I am flattered beyond words, immersed in the wonder that is you! Thank you, my dear, dear friend! xo
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I suppose we've know one another long enough for me to be a bit personal, eh?
Er, to leave su.. read moreI suppose we've know one another long enough for me to be a bit personal, eh?
Er, to leave such a personal review.
And, talk about flattered … I'm all a'blush! ; )
This is sensuous and romantic, gossamer and yet full of wit and intelligence. Sexy without being obvious. And speaking of you I don't agree that you are an amateur. And this is proof that you are not. Brilliant piece of writing.
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I will bask in the glow of this review whenever I question my ability to challenge myself to become .. read moreI will bask in the glow of this review whenever I question my ability to challenge myself to become a better poet. Growth is of most importance to me, as is the validation of those I admire. Thank you most kindly, Ken!
Well, awesome! Both are learning their art form, their position, their likes and dislikes.
It builds the tension till the last ending; keeps the reader anticipating something.
Awesome!
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Thank you for the smile you always leave me with, Sami!
phenomenal descriptions of the experience of posing nude for an artist. i imagine that's exactly how it feels and is. you've got the entire package here from title on down. i don't see how it could get much better than this. simply wonderful poetry much enjoyed and appreciated. top notch for sure. bravo.
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Pete, my man, you are always a most welcomed sight to see. Thank you, my patriot friend!
Amateur perhaps...novice yes...BUT. This is an artist who captures reality and presents it rather than trying to cover it up with brush strokes.
He paints the real person....and she allows him to show her in all her glory, including the flaws.
The story told in this poem really moved me....
and I remember sitting for an art class...not nude....but as I am....some captured the humanness so well....others took liberties to make their drawings perfect. I am far from perfect and appreciated the reality drawings of me.
the depth of the person you are always comes through in your poetry.
j.
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I made a vow to myself as a poet, to always better myself as a writer. And I try to learn, and abso.. read moreI made a vow to myself as a poet, to always better myself as a writer. And I try to learn, and absorb as much as I can to achieve that. Thank you for this inspiring review, Jacob. Your words, kindness and friendship are deeply valued!
Hii! I'm a rookie writer and I want a few people to read and support my story and first story I've published! Its okay if you guys don't want to read it but its ok!! I loved the poetry and rhyming of this masterpiece, I'd gladly want to learn from my elders like this person! - Written by young writer, el :D
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Thank you, Elgarcia! Always thrilled to garnish a new reader. Welcome to the WC!