A Novice to Art

A Novice to Art

A Poem by Kelly Scheppers

A Novice to Art

 

 

 

i was a novice to art

he was an amateur at best

stroking my scars and imperfections

with the highbrowed demeanor

of a scholar.

 

our conversation was sparse

indulging in the contrast of shadow and light,

as he gathered his tools

in preparation

like a priest in benediction.

 

catching my breath i looked away

trying hard not to gaze upon

the smile behind his probing eyes,

the low brimmed fedora

that brought his chiseled features

into close proximity.

 

he encircled my  anatomy

like a lioness in a cage,

pointing my chin towards my left shoulder

capturing ribbons of braided sunlight

in the tendrils of upswept hair.

 

i took another breath,  exhaled

my gown descended to the floor

in a diaphanous pool

 

a novice to art.

© 2024 Kelly Scheppers


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Interesting, with some good word usage. It brought to mind a scenario in which, a woman and man meet in the context of an artistic pursuit of some kind. Perhaps, in the same dance group or an orchestra? Anyway, because the woman is possibly kind of new to all this, as a "novice"; it creates a barrier or tensions between herself and the guy she has eyes for? However, the guy is probably a snob; and doesn't know what he might be missing.! If he appreciated the woman enough, then her novice status in art; would not deter him! He seems to like her physical beauty, as is clearly suggested in verse four? Anyway, this is probably the best work which I have read by this authoress; so far.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

A mighty perceptive insight! Thank you!
Twilight

2 Months Ago

Well, I admit that I made a few intuitive guesses; as part of that insight. I genuinely think it's p.. read more



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Hi Kell. I came by to visit. You found a pic that really suited the words and the thoughts. Life from the model's view.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

I am thrilled to see you, old friend. We've been here so long I believe we are fixtures! Lol, good .. read more
This write is a mixture of romantic, seductive, artistic and metaphoric. Lovely

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

Thank you most kindly, Soren!
Ahhh, Dearest Kelly 🎨 ⚤

There is nothing I cherish more than coming back to You, following a prolonged hiatus away. This is said in an effort to convince you of the deeply joyous elation in your ever expanding amelioration of mastered prowess, donning a poetic pen, I feel all the way into my ever-smitten bones.
Ya know, concerning this piece(?), I perceive it in two distinct settings: One, with light humor, where the novice nude artist's model 🎨 is posing and being set-up by her scholarly pretentious, amateur artist. The other, a sensually stimulating moment shared between two inexperienced lovers ⚤ … both of whom wish to be considered sexually sophisticated, in which Nature takes due course after considerable enticing foreplay (stroking scars 'n imperfections, indulging in the contrast of shadow and light, and the like); whereafter, her "gown descended to the floor in a diaphanous pool." Sheer verbal magic, Poetess … scheesh!

No one, Dear Kelly, does poetic diction with the verve, originality, and class You do … succulent sensuality with just a tactile pinch enough deliciously discreet porno to set one's imaginative libido spinning and left melting into its socks.
On the other hand, I genuinely enjoy this playful smile, aroused by images of the hopeful, clueless model and pretentiously adept artist.

I can almost hear you snickering at my bumbling guesses; ah, well, some things never change … LOL!
Either way, M'Dear, beautifully done, as usual!
You never cease to amaze my senses … happy hugs 'n smiles! ⁓ Richard🖌

[that gorgeous artwork sure would make a thrilling statement displayed atop this sweet masterpiece]
150/100

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

However am I to catch my breath after indulging in such a delicious review? Wow, I am flattered beyo.. read more
Richard🖌

2 Months Ago

I suppose we've know one another long enough for me to be a bit personal, eh?
Er, to leave su.. read more
Sounds like you were also a novice to seduction. Could have had a better instructor, though.

Posted 2 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

Thank you, John. How are you?
John the Baptist

2 Months Ago

So. far, so good.
This is sensuous and romantic, gossamer and yet full of wit and intelligence. Sexy without being obvious. And speaking of you I don't agree that you are an amateur. And this is proof that you are not. Brilliant piece of writing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

I will bask in the glow of this review whenever I question my ability to challenge myself to become .. read more
So so romantic. Very good

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Tumi!
Well, awesome! Both are learning their art form, their position, their likes and dislikes.
It builds the tension till the last ending; keeps the reader anticipating something.
Awesome!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the smile you always leave me with, Sami!
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

You are welcome Kelley!
phenomenal descriptions of the experience of posing nude for an artist. i imagine that's exactly how it feels and is. you've got the entire package here from title on down. i don't see how it could get much better than this. simply wonderful poetry much enjoyed and appreciated. top notch for sure. bravo.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

Pete, my man, you are always a most welcomed sight to see. Thank you, my patriot friend!
Amateur perhaps...novice yes...BUT. This is an artist who captures reality and presents it rather than trying to cover it up with brush strokes.
He paints the real person....and she allows him to show her in all her glory, including the flaws.
The story told in this poem really moved me....

and I remember sitting for an art class...not nude....but as I am....some captured the humanness so well....others took liberties to make their drawings perfect. I am far from perfect and appreciated the reality drawings of me.
the depth of the person you are always comes through in your poetry.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

I made a vow to myself as a poet, to always better myself as a writer. And I try to learn, and abso.. read more
Hii! I'm a rookie writer and I want a few people to read and support my story and first story I've published! Its okay if you guys don't want to read it but its ok!! I loved the poetry and rhyming of this masterpiece, I'd gladly want to learn from my elders like this person! - Written by young writer, el :D

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Elgarcia! Always thrilled to garnish a new reader. Welcome to the WC!

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