A Growing Crush

Haha, 9th grade poem as well. I remember because this is about my friend Freddie.

We walk together through the halls,

our arms brush, I feel it, but do you?

I glance up just as you peek down and your smile brightens my day.

Just as quickly as I look up, I look down the heat rushing to my cheeks turning them pink.

You realize and put your arms around my shoulders, sending me the secret I've been waiting for.

We reach your locker and you drop your arm, even though it's gone I can still feel its weight.

I silently watch you as you gather your things, you feel my eyes.

You zip your back pack and slowly turn around, wrapping your arms around me.

You slightly pull back and lean in slowly, I feel our lips brush.

I look up and you smile, our eyes twinkle and then it hits me.

 

My crush on you is growing stronger. 

Author's Note

Haha. Memories are great, (: I love traveling down memory lane.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

These memories seem great. Remembering an early crush and love. I really like this. It's tender, sweet and romantic.

[Ima]

no doubt memories are really great ...and you portrayed this one perfectly !!
thumbs up !!
=D

[KaySea]

very sweet. i love this poem. it gave me chills.

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{ahh-sweet memories--i love this poem--
if only i were young enough to travel
down such a sentimental memory lane}

...really-a great poem...

james:-)

[Dream Weaver]

Nicely done, soft and sweet and memorable.. ;)

[snapstache]

hahhaha Freddie :) I'm sorry..no offence but that name just makes me laugh :) but good poem btw :)
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