Be Still, My Aching Heart

Be Still, My Aching Heart

A Poem by MusicLove93
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Lost love

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Be still my aching heart,

For, we must live with her and I apart.

Be still my wandering mind,

There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.

 

She came into my life and filled it with light,

And as quick as she came, she was gone, out of sight.

I wonder if she even knew that I could have been hers

Every time she came near, oh how butterflies started to stir.

 

Be still my aching heart,

For, we must live with her and I apart.

Be still my wandering mind,

There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.

 

Her lips, so seductively red, made me melt

I wish, just once, I could have known how she felt.

Her beautiful eyes pierced right through my heart.

She made me feel pretty, but now I’m just torn apart.

 

Be still my aching heart,

For, we must live with her and I apart.

Be still my wandering mind,

There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.

 

So please, just be still for me now...

© 2012 MusicLove93


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Be still my aching heart,
For, we must live with her and I apart.
Be still my wandering mind,
There’s no point, she won’t ever be mine.
 
So please, just be still for me now...


Romance at his best your words flawless over all simply brilliance...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice piece. Love the heart-tugging rhyme here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MusicLove93

7 Years Ago

Thank you(:
Oh I know this feeling all too well... very well done... the creativity in expressing your emotions is excellent.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MusicLove93

7 Years Ago

Thank you(:
Sad but lovely poem...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MusicLove93

7 Years Ago

Thank you(:
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are quite welcome...
i started singing this and i started tearing up. this is so heart breakingly beautiful. i must favorite this!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MusicLove93

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it enough to favorite it! Thank you(:
It tears you up doesn't it? To be apart from her... with no hope on the horizon in any direction. You keep thinking about it, obsessing over it. Such delicate, essential death.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MusicLove93

7 Years Ago

It really does choke me up sometimes. It's hard to get over such things sometimes.
Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Personally, and I'm just speaking for the way I'm wired, I don't know if we ever really get over som.. read more
MusicLove93

7 Years Ago

I don't think we ever do either.
Well thank you, my good sir. Virtual hugs are always welcome .. read more
Distance can change a great many things and it may hurt with longing for something to change or be different.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the repetition and the story in the poem. Hard to realize the love is finished. I like the way you ended the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MusicLove93

7 Years Ago

Thank you(:
Such intensities in the relation with another must surely feel like one is looking at a mirror and the friend who knew that about us.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely(!) love this poem!
It has such a nice flow and rhythm to it that I agree it seems like song lyrics. It is a totally relatable subject and I love how tough described everything!
It is always a pleasure to read your writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MusicLove93

7 Years Ago

Thank you(:
I think I was kind of singing it when I wrote it. It seems fitting to call it a s.. read more

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