Freedom in a Kiss

Freedom in a Kiss

A Poem by MusicLove93
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A little rusty. Haven't been writing in forever it seems. Just getting my thoughts out on paper for once. Tell me what you think!

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She tastes of cigarettes,

But her kisses are like a breath of fresh air.

Every one, is a lungful of freedom.

Every embrace is like fire upon my skin.

There's so much wrong with what we're doing,

But somehow, it just feels so right.

We laugh, and smoke, and f**k.

When we are together, it's like nothing else matters;

For that moment in time, its just her and I.

Nothing but the touch oh her hand on mine is important.

The times are so brief, the moments so fleeting,

But my god, they're f*****g perfect.

© 2014 MusicLove93


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MusicLove93
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Remind me of a good country song.
"We laugh, and smoke, and f**k."
Sometime a short time with laughter is better than a lifetime with sadness. I liked the positive energy and want in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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made a poetic expression through a kiss...nice work

Posted 4 Years Ago


Love it! A newness, almost like youth...refreshingly candid.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I felt as if this person was magical and the free spirit here
caught second hand happiness. This was a guilt free contact high.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A kiss may sometimes reach very far ... into the depths of the profound ... about why we love.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Remind me of a good country song.
"We laugh, and smoke, and f**k."
Sometime a short time with laughter is better than a lifetime with sadness. I liked the positive energy and want in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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MusicLove93
MusicLove93

Jefferson, OR



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I've never really shared my writing with many people, never thought I was really any good I guess. But, I love writing and have been writing for forever. That and music and art are my passions. You wo.. more..

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