I Wonder...

I Wonder...

A Poem by MusicLove93
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A really old piece I found in a notebook somewhere. Decided to post it anyway ha

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Phone full of numbers,
Yet not a single person to call.

Room full of faces,
No real friends here at all.

Town full of bodies,
Yet not a single soul around.

City full of houses,
Yet, no home to be found.

I wonder when the time will come,
When the numbers will become people,
The faces into friends,
The bodies into souls,
And the houses into homes.

© 2011 MusicLove93


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Wow! The questions run so deep in this poem. A sign of the genius mind at work. Ummm --as Reading Music put it --speechless --nobody's ever wondered about this before. For those who say "ahead of your time" please disregard, keep moving forward with this talent, never surrender, and you will become the standard by which all others write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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keep going you're really amazing deep words from a big heart

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the position you give to the reader. One, that stands off to the side and sees everything in their surroundings. The theme from "Midnight Cowboy" seems to play well in this background. Well written poem. A very enjoyable read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really,really deep.something where everyone is a cause and victim.nice piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice! It speaks to us in simple terms of thoughts of loneliness, the desire for companionship, perhaps even love. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW!! very well written and expressed. the questions were deep and sentimental. great write!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so amazing! Wonderful job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing,wondeful,outstanding.......
Lovely work.
Congratulations!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice sentiment ... well expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Exceptionally expressed; now one of my favorites of yours.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love this ! Every line of it. I often feel like this especially the first two lines and second two lines:
"Phone full of numbers,
Yet not a single person to call.

Room full of faces,
No real friends here at all."

I love the way you ended it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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