The Wolf and The Moon

This is a tale of love,
Between a wolf below and moon above.

They both in solitude
Curse their fate
Aber adore they ,each other every day
Like a faithful loving mate

To express its love,the wolf howl
Its evidence is secured
By the king of night, the owl
Flickering its light
Moon too express his affection
From the great height
Thats how ,two communicate
In that dark windy night

No lust blot their love true
Each other's presence is what they value

Then moon appears like a disc round, glowing
Lost in his love, thousands following
Aber ,out of jealousy,the wolf streaks and starts howling

And then the Uncle Sun comes
Ending all their fun
~MUSKAN

(P.s. -aber is but in German)

Reviews

[Abhishek Izy]

Again, you take the imagination out of your head and give it a form and I can say right way, I would be madly in love with it.

So beautiful is your stretch of imagination

[Muskan]

Thank you for your appreciative words.
Although am more into writing about social issues than the fiction

[BESMASMILE]

Wow! What a soaring imagination! What a great rendition of feelings, love and envy! Wrapped into a poetic flair!

[Muskan]

Thank you for your visit and your kind words

[Neville]

A delight to find and even more so to read and to consider over a nice cup of strong black coffee... Neville

[Muskan]

Thank you dear Neville , I appreciate your visit and your kind words:-)

[Neville]

my very sincere pleasure... N

[emmajoy]

' They both in solitude - Curse their fate - Aber adore they ,each other every day - Like a faithful loving mate .. ]

Love at a distance, beckoning, waiting. Tragicially, however, what's written in the stars will never come true. Your words are laid warmly and in an unusual but charming style.

[Muskan]

Thank you so much, really appreciate your review:-)

[emmajoy]

You're welcome. Am I right in thinking that English might not be your first language?

[Muskan]

Yes you are:-D
Being an Indian Hindi is my first language

[emmajoy]

You speak English so very well!

[Muskan]

My pleasure to hear:D

[Anjeline]

A very new topic and written very well. I really liked how you added a little fun at the end by using uncle sun:D
A very nice poem and I really liked it a lot. Great work :)

[Muskan]

Thank you so much dear Anjeline,:-D

[Anjeline]

You're welcome 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the wolf howls for love, the moon won't come any closer...it remains where it is...distant, inviting, but not touching...much like human love can be...we can love from afar...and wish for proximity...but it doesn't always come..and with a new sun, a new day...might disappear from our sky altogether.
j.

[Muskan]

Yes , it is a perfect example of pure love with lust no around as that in a human love story nowadays.
Thank you, I really appreciate your comment