Inner Thoughts Will Kill

Inner Thoughts Will Kill

A Poem by Jock Engelman

Inner Deep Thoughts Scare,
Inner Deep Thoughts Dare,
Inner Deep Thoughts Swear,
That I Will Kill There.

© 2012 Jock Engelman


Author's Note

Jock Engelman
An Experimental piece.
My very first Quatrain form poem...
( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Quatrain )

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I find this first attempt already good (well, I can also say far better than my first quatrain).

Rhyming achieved in AABB format, but I am not sure about the meter taken which is also very important in penning formal poetry. In another way around, when I read it aloud the piece produced music to the ear, which is the very goal of metering. Just keep the attempt going mate.


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It's really good. Simple, Direct. I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Good piece, sir. Well done.


Posted 11 Years Ago


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I love it : )
This is really good, so much said in a few short words.
Awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem! It's short, simple, and to the point. Keep up the good work!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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great write! short and to the point XD

Posted 11 Years Ago


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An honorable attempt methinks. I like thoughts that are deep and dark. Just pleased they are not my thoughts..............well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Interesting thoughts, I think it's good and leaves the reader with a lot of questions, if you're having this thoughts for real? or if you write it from out of a perspective... It's nice to experiment with a several types of poetry always! good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I happen to agree with every stanza. Inner thoughts are perhaps the most haunting. They really do tend to saturate the mind with nightmares.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Hmm interesting

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem! Short and I learned about a new kind of poem. xD *Thumbs up*
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Added on April 8, 2012
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Tags: inner, deep, thoughts, scare, dare, swear, will, kill, there, poem, dark, evil, lost

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Jock Engelman
Jock Engelman

Newcastle, New South Wales, Australia



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I am a guy who has gone through a lot over the years, i have many illnesses which i manage quite well. But i am still riddled with many demons. I was bullied for many years, so now i use my years of t.. more..

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