WISE??

WISE??

A Poem by M.Babu
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"I’m kilos of intelligence, Compacted into a body."

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I’m the fountain of wisdom,

Tapped and free flowing…
Current with information, facts;
Relevant and foreboding.

I’m kilos of intelligence,
Compacted into a body.
Aware of math, aware of science…
Like an intelligent prodigy.

I’m witty, I’m sharp,
Like the tortoise in the tales.
I take my time and I deliver,
For my knowledge’s measured’n scales.


I’m fantastic and I’m smart,
But sometimes I need reminding.
Especially when I’m blank,
And the exam paper needs writing.


~M.Babu~

© 2012 M.Babu


Author's Note

M.Babu
Thanks for reading! Needed a little light poetry…been too serious with my pieces of late!

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Just had an examination today! Haha! XD
Anyway...This was definitely great...I like the rhyming on some lines...The whole poem flows so well that whenever I read it out loud, it sounds so nice!
This is somewhat unique and you've written it well!
Excellent piece of art!
:)))

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I liked it. It was light hearted and fun. I think its important to show how versatile you are with your writing. It gives your readers a breath of fresh air and it shows that you're capable of producing great work over a broad spectrum. That your not just a one tone kind of guy. :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think you hit the mark perfectly!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awesome poem about the brain! The last four lines are really very very true! Superb:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like your author's note, you made this one a bit fun and indeed light. I like this line:
"Like the tortoise in the tales."
I also enjoyed the last stanza... really quite nice, and nice use of vocabulary.

Posted 8 Years Ago


There is such a playful joy here, of what is what should be... You created an atmosphere of the mind's life and longing, and letting us all wonder what lies in that amazing brain of yours!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yes, definitely a fun read! Smart, witty, and light-hearted. A wonderful piece

Posted 8 Years Ago


hmmmm.
reminds me of one of my favorite poets....KRS1.

Good stuff!

t

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blank stares on the exam page, nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trusted and guarded, I enjoy your use of language! x

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah yes, we can feel so intimidated at times by such things that we lose sight of what we really are! I love the build up here love, the essence of realisation...until that time arrives...then the doubt....
Wonderful piece xoxo

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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