What Do You Want With Me?

What Do You Want With Me?

A Poem by Dalaina Renee

I'm so plain and ordinairy.

What do you want with me?

 

I'm nothing special,everyone can see!

What do you want with me?

 

I am but a poor soul,without a cent to see!

What do you want with me?

 

I am a liar, I have been told, you want to

trust in me?

What do you want with me?

 

Yet you look upon me with love in your eye's.

Lord,what do you want with me?

 

You sent your only son on the cross to die for me.

What do you want from me?

 

You ask me to live for you.

So that everyone can see.

How much you love me.

 

That is what you want from me.....

© 2008 Dalaina Renee


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Beautiful! You have hit the nail on the head with this piece. When Jesus hung nailed to the cross. He could have had His angels take Him down. He could have gotten down all my Himself. He didn't need the angel, but He saw my face in the future and He saw yours too. If it were only you and me who would be saved; He still would have gone to the cross that day. Great Write.

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When I read the title to this poem, I thought it would be about abusive relationships. What a surprise it was when I finished reading it and it was about what our Lord and Savior Jesus did for each and every one us. Good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Aww...that is cute. God does ask alot from us. We have to listen to him!

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That is a very good question alot of ask ourselves! You summed it all up!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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thanks for stopping by and encourageing me, this is a good story about jesus you writin is so good i admire you delaina thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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This is a very deep and heartfelt piece. While I was reading this poem it really tugged at my soul. I think it is beautifully written and very well expressed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful! You have hit the nail on the head with this piece. When Jesus hung nailed to the cross. He could have had His angels take Him down. He could have gotten down all my Himself. He didn't need the angel, but He saw my face in the future and He saw yours too. If it were only you and me who would be saved; He still would have gone to the cross that day. Great Write.

Author: Nancy Lee Shrader

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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