Reaching Through the Glass

Reaching Through the Glass

A Poem by DeathByChoice

 

 

Hand of gentle glass

Reaching through

As though liquid light pours onto

Skin so soft,

So gentle


Reason of light

Reason to nothing more than courage

As though liquid light pours into

Heart so strong,

So brave


Eyes of pure passion

Devoured in such need

As though liquid flames burn onto

Strength so deep,

So rich


Enjoy the Reaching Glass

For 'tis a land when the waking world turns

To dreams for instructions in

Body

Light

Love

...

Life

© 2010 DeathByChoice


Author's Note

DeathByChoice
Again, anything and everything is welcome :)

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Third stanza is beautiful, really great, simple choice of words that work well together to create the ambiance you want in the piece, dark but graceful and twisting in its meaning.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this poem!!! Great imagery! Excellent work! Looking further to read more of your work :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Excellent structure and style. I like your word choice as well! Nicely done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very well written, leaves one to think...nice piece

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 16, 2010
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DeathByChoice
DeathByChoice

DeadLandHappy, OH



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Name: Megan Dorothy Age: 16 Sexual Orientation: Bisexual Religion: Atheist Classifications: Emotional. Dark. Doesn't always play well with others. Quiet. Bipolar. Imaginative. Secluded. Independan.. more..

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